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Lonely Fanboy48


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This story is a sequel to Silverstream As My Seapony Pal


You come across a pony in the forest who’s all alone while she has three legs instead of four. She’s so sad you wonder why she’s in the middle of the forest. You decided to take her to your cabin to take good care of her.

Thanks to Daniyel099 for editing this.
https://www.fimfiction.net/user/292246/Daniyel099

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Comments ( 5 )

What happened to her ears? They looked anatomically correct

9771466
The Best Kind Of Correct.


Ahem.

Moving along.

I spotted a few grammatical errors.

The pacing was also a tad snappy.

But overall it was cute!

I'll stamp this with a green paw print!

File it away under " Sweet" 💝

9771791
This is the fourth entry to the pony pals stories, I didn’t want the story to be longer then I thought. That’s way the pacing is getting less effort since I’m trying to do something different in every entry.

I really enjoyed this. Pacing is a little fast but apart from that its a cute story.

This site needs more kerfuffle stories. I liked this. Pacing is crazy fast but its still pretty good.

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