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Equestria is bound in beauty and life, and hold only its royal guard and a small militia for its defense, though many countries around it would defend it if war was brought to it.

But if blade was brought down on Equestria with no help from her allies, who would defend her?

And when that possibility arises, Celestia looks to a friend form the northern country of Galastria, which gives her what she hopefully needs to help raise the first Equestrian Knights.

Though, it may already be too late...




Author:
So, those who have read my um.... 'first' attempt at doing this kinda thing, know that I have learned a valuable lesson. Do all stories in word document. ALWAYS!

SO this is a re-do of Dragon Guard, which even I have to say was a bad job, and as much as I would love to edit it, and work on it more, its better to just wipe clean the problems from the past and restart with a better job from the beginning.

Yes, Kleric Earthshaker will be returning, and yes Blitz-Krieg will be returning as well, though better thought out, described and written.

Other stuff will be edited as time goes on.

Thank you for reading this and have fun!

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 9 )

is ther gonna be a germaney(german) force cause germany influences the world greatly (just asking) :pinkiehappy:

67206 thats actually Galastria and Prussia... as Prussia was Germany way back when... :ajsmug: and now you know!

67776 YAY welp im now have no idea how you could make this story better

143199 I forgot to post links to that didn't I?

... I did...

Bbuuuuuuuuuuuu-
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We are war!”

The majority of hte guards eyes widened, but one, a tall whilte earth pony walked forward, shaking slightly.

The story is progressing nicely but this chapter really needed to be read over a few more times. Also, I completley skipped the part starting with "The chamber was clambered with ponies" up until luna started talking. Trying to introduce that many characters using soley physical descriptions at once is a always a bad idea. Trying to introduce those characters when we don't know their names is just frustrating.

144107 Fixed, and well... did all their names, and it didn't seem right.

Either way the next chapter should clear that up.

The more I read the better it gets. I can't wait till the next chapter. I wonder if twillight parents death were set up and if so who knows that it was set up. Or was it really just chance?

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