Damn that missing page of the book, I can't get the feeling that something bad is going to happen. Not tonight, not tomorrow, but soon. The chapter pictures how big is the love from one to the other, but I think there are 2 types of love here. The one that Blaze has, everlasting, caring for Luna, and doesn't care to say it out loud to some guards. The other is the love that Luna has. It may be very similar to Blaze's but it has a touch of emotional dependence. I really like how you can make the love burst out of my screen. I can even taste the sweetness of their love from my chair, every tender moment's word distilled love. Not everyone can do that.
1195253 You make me feel good inside when you say such kind things! You are definitely one of my best fans! I can't wait to see what your writing will be like, should you ever decide to give it a shot! I'm glad to hear how you cherish my writing so! And what did you mean when you said you could still improve your English, it sounds great!
1199656 Distilled essence of D'awww... That was a fast one.
Research has been done upon this new substance, and the results say that the only thing capable of counteract its effect is another chapter from Ps3luver. Sadly these things are hard to come by, but it's worth the wait. (Don't get me started on the secondary effects of not taking your dose...)
1196731 You told me this chapter didn't have a lot of action. It didn't need any. Chapters that build around the romance and allow other characters to interact, help to make a story good! This chapter is a fine example! I enjoyed the relaxing pace. It's like some of the chapters in my Luna fics and the overall current tone in my Celestia Fic. So keep up the good work! And things weren't too raunchy (language-wise) between them. In fact it helped build the anticipation for the next chapter.
As usual, I'm left to close with....MOAR PLEASE!
Though I can't help but agree with 1195253, something bad is looming overhead...like the sword of Damocles. Curse that missing page! Oh well, this fic wouldn't be so riveting without its absence.
1199656 Distilled Dawww, eh? I wonder if that is like the comment someone left on my Luna fic, comparing chapter 7 to drinking chocolate syrup straight from the bottle.
Oh yeah, I noticed that your fic is just under 10,000 word now. I'll be you're glad you didn't limit it to a mere 5,000, like you originally expected! Keep up the good work!
1212456 Actually, i wouldn't know about said comment. Oddly enough, THAT EXACT story is next on my 'read it later' list. After i get through my PMs (again...). It is a good analogy though.
1238912 I thank you so much for your support! And hope you like Chapter 8 when I post it this weekend! My fans are what keep me going, even if I don't have a ton. You are awesome for liking this story dude! -Ps3luver
Nice chapter!
Also that end, sounds pretty saucy :P
oddly the line "i can wait until tonight" is giving off two possibilities in my mind, and one of them doesnt look very happy at all
Damn that missing page of the book, I can't get the feeling that something bad is going to happen. Not tonight, not tomorrow, but soon.
The chapter pictures how big is the love from one to the other, but I think there are 2 types of love here.
The one that Blaze has, everlasting, caring for Luna, and doesn't care to say it out loud to some guards.
The other is the love that Luna has. It may be very similar to Blaze's but it has a touch of emotional dependence.
I really like how you can make the love burst out of my screen. I can even taste the sweetness of their love from my chair, every tender moment's word distilled love.
Not everyone can do that.
1195253
You make me feel good inside when you say such kind things! You are definitely one of my best fans! I can't wait to see what your writing will be like, should you ever decide to give it a shot! I'm glad to hear how you cherish my writing so! And what did you mean when you said you could still improve your English, it sounds great!
Take care By123445,
-Ps3luver
This didn't start out nearly as sadly as i'd originally thought, with the 'tragedy' tag and all. All in all, i like this story.
1195253
Distilled essense of D'awww? Ps3luver, that's a new type of diabetes you might be creating here with as sweet as this story is.
1199656
Distilled essence of D'awww...
That was a fast one.
Research has been done upon this new substance, and the results say that the only thing capable of counteract its effect is another chapter from Ps3luver.
Sadly these things are hard to come by, but it's worth the wait.
(Don't get me started on the secondary effects of not taking your dose...)
1196731
You told me this chapter didn't have a lot of action. It didn't need any. Chapters that build around the romance and allow other characters to interact, help to make a story good! This chapter is a fine example! I enjoyed the relaxing pace. It's like some of the chapters in my Luna fics and the overall current tone in my Celestia Fic. So keep up the good work! And things weren't too raunchy (language-wise) between them. In fact it helped build the anticipation for the next chapter.
As usual, I'm left to close with....MOAR PLEASE!
Though I can't help but agree with 1195253, something bad is looming overhead...like the sword of Damocles. Curse that missing page! Oh well, this fic wouldn't be so riveting without its absence.
1199656
Distilled Dawww, eh? I wonder if that is like the comment someone left on my Luna fic, comparing chapter 7 to drinking chocolate syrup straight from the bottle.
Oh yeah, I noticed that your fic is just under 10,000 word now. I'll be you're glad you didn't limit it to a mere 5,000, like you originally expected! Keep up the good work!
1212456
Actually, i wouldn't know about said comment. Oddly enough, THAT EXACT story is next on my 'read it later' list. After i get through my PMs (again...). It is a good analogy though.
Here's a touchin' story...wait... never mind... it's right in front of me.
1238912
I thank you so much for your support! And hope you like Chapter 8 when I post it this weekend! My fans are what keep me going, even if I don't have a ton.
You are awesome for liking this story dude!
-Ps3luver