Alternative Take(Baltimare Entrance)
(Possible intro theme?)
As royal guard waited at the harbor, a sound came across the harbor as a lone Ship larger than an Ursa Major floated into the harbor. The people of the city watched in scared silence as the metal Goliath moved into the center of the harbor before laying anchor. A long low horn rang from the beast ship as a being stood at the front of the deck.
'Now to do what I practiced with you in the dreams cape' Aquarius said in his mind. Hanz nodded before holding his right arm skyward before a vortex enveloped the ship. The deck below him morphed and changed, but he did not fall. The turrets floated up before morphing and Hanz was enveloped in light with a final flash it was done.
The ponies rubbed their eyes of spots before a guard captain pulled out his spyglass and gasped. Their stood a six foot tall being in an admiral's clothes, but there was something special. On his hands were two gauntlets that had turrets as if shrunk off the metal goliath. Two more turrets lay on the epaulets of the coat. Torpedo tubes hung on a belt of the beings pants, and a pair of metal shoes supported him above the water.
"Greetings. I am Hanz Von Ravenmark. Admiral of H-44 Germania." the being said in front of them before bowing and offering a hand. "It is a pleasure to make your acquaintance." He finished...
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No thank you but that is cool thing
I can see this going somewhere, not sure how many would accept that. I think it's cool but maybe keep it as a dream body if he meets Luna in the dreamscape.
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There is a blog post currently for fans of this story like you. Its not going to die, but I need you to read this post to get more info on where to direct my stories.
I love the story keep up the good work but lol imagine seeing something like that.
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The idea came from two anime. Kantai Collection and Azur LAne
Azur Lane's Freidrich de Grosse(H-39)
tse1.mm.bing.net/th?id=OIP.oandxOfg5fiON3QUMwOYyAHaHa&pid=Api&P=0&w=300&h=300
Kantai Collection's (Video game's Bismarck)
tse3.mm.bing.net/th?id=OIP.PUfsLJty81G3ehMKQE11nwHaER&pid=Api&P=0&w=277&h=161
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Huh i can see what you were going for and belive me i wish i can do that.
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Yeah the idea was that this would Give Hanz the ability to take his firepower with him inland, and the ship would return to normal for long range travel cross the oceans
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no no no no no, this is not anime, i'm against this idea
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I didn't say it was happening here. It was just playing round with the concept and maybe putting it somewhere else.
Okay this is cool I like the idea.
Dont like it
YAY ITS NOT DEAD
I wouldn't mind this mechanic but only if he can't reach the enemy from the sea and he's go on the land and unentrenched the enemy
Maybe instead have the ship be put in a bottle on his belt?
Yeah I don’t likes it
Plz dont tell me this is dead it so great what your doing plzzzz continues
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IT isnt dead just College has my attention rn, plus I don't want to force a chapter to be written since that feels lackluster in content
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Do you need help? With the story. Because i have some experience to a degree. I made story but never published them
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Kind of. I currently have left of with Hanz meeting the royalty and some of the barons planning, but I question what to do next. I dont know if the audience would find a chapter solely betweeen HAnz and the royalty entertaining or mash the next two chapter into a super one, but that feels like those who like the action are left with baggage
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You're better to finish them both and then release them but not all at once. even if you finish them better to have a 4-5 day period between them
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Do you have a discord it would be easier to talk i got more info to give you
but personally, I like when there is conflict especially when it looks like a last stand
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If you need ideas maybe ask your fans, or if you want pass ideas to me and ask for what I think, also, I like the idea you put into here, but you could always make a alternate version of this that is,well this chapter
Please make a separate story with kancolle and azur lane girls coming with him to help Aquarius and helping him find peace and love as a h 44 Germania azur lane/kancolle universe or something. Please, it's hard to find any good stories that involves kancolle and/or azur lane either here or at fanfiction website