9687882 Sounds good. You don't have to go super in depth into how everything works (no need to say "mares are x times stronger than they look/than stallions" or whatever), but the story is written with the assumption that the reader is familiar with the "rules" for your world when this is not necessarily the case. Just some sort of backstory for the reader would be nice.
At first, she had my curiosity. Now, she had my attention. “It’s kind of rare you hear somebody chose a career to spite somebody. Especially there mom.” I commented. “She really didn’t want you to become a seamstress, huh?” I inquired.
I nestled my muzzleonto her boobs, closing my eyes, the prospect of doing this with the other girls was appealing. Maybe I’ll bring it up to them… on second thought, probably not.
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Sounds good. You don't have to go super in depth into how everything works (no need to say "mares are x times stronger than they look/than stallions" or whatever), but the story is written with the assumption that the reader is familiar with the "rules" for your world when this is not necessarily the case. Just some sort of backstory for the reader would be nice.
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