Overall, an enjoyable story. There were a couple redundant portions that read weirdly (e.g. the part about legal age to start milking). Also, "she was a mare so her physical strength triumphed over mine" is just said and passed over like it's nothing. Are we goimg to learn a bit more about this universe in upcoming chapters?

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I'm glad you extracted enjoyment in this story despite the myriad of flaws it has. And yes, I have every intention to expand this universe in further chapters.