Troubled by her persistent inability to defend her subjects, Princess Luna seeks the aid of ancient powers to allow her to stand beside Equestria's guardians. She only must face her greatest fear... Twilight Sparkle.
Everyone will probably wonder, so I'll just say: it's been long enough between "I opened the story up" and "I actually read the story" (several days, actually), that I've lost the fact that it's not a single-chapter affair from memory. Suffice to say, the previous comment was probably baseless, and at best would've gotten me a "Have you read the other chapters?", at which I would've been properly humbled. So I'll just skip that and say, "What a wonderful entry for the story" instead. ;D The fact that I took it for the whole thing does say something about how it's written - it works perfectly well on its own! ;D
Now, onto the other chapters!
Yes, I realized that I could've simply edited the comment. It was bad enough that I deleted it before this realization hit, however. :D
Alright, I'm interested.
Well, it can't really have helped Luna that Celestia literally has a thousand years of experience on her while she was stuck in the moon.
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Yay~! Always a great thing to hear on Chapter 1~! <3
9670888
Super true, but Celestia's been holding back for a reason~! Luna? Kinda forced to~ :( She's a mare who needs some help to get up to speed~! <3
Everyone will probably wonder, so I'll just say: it's been long enough between "I opened the story up" and "I actually read the story" (several days, actually), that I've lost the fact that it's not a single-chapter affair from memory. Suffice to say, the previous comment was probably baseless, and at best would've gotten me a "Have you read the other chapters?", at which I would've been properly humbled. So I'll just skip that and say, "What a wonderful entry for the story" instead. ;D The fact that I took it for the whole thing does say something about how it's written - it works perfectly well on its own! ;D
Now, onto the other chapters!
Yes, I realized that I could've simply edited the comment. It was bad enough that I deleted it before this realization hit, however. :D
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You’re adorbs and totes wonderful! I’m gonna day THANK YE. Instead of anything else (besides what I already said~)!