All Eyes On Me

fanreader999999

fanreader999999 #1 · Jun 1st, 2019 · 1 · 1 · 3. A New Form ·

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Hmm

Eris Dis Harmonia

Eris Dis Harmonia #2 · Jun 1st, 2019 · 6 · · 3. A New Form ·

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Oh, you terrible, wonderful, awful, glorious, little plant horse.

I'm quite impressed.

Mix-up

Mix-up #3 · Jun 1st, 2019 · 4 · · 3. A New Form ·

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This had been a fun read, keep it up.

Parallel Black

Parallel Black #4 · Jun 2nd, 2019 · 2 · · 3. A New Form ·

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This was a great little story! I'd love to see a continuation, and perhaps some more exploration of Fluttershy's inner thoughts as she preys upon different ponies.

Silent Whisper

Silent Whisper #5 · Jun 2nd, 2019 · 2 · · 3. A New Form ·

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Spiders were not my kink before, but now they somehow are! Another incredible fic, Withania! I always love seeing your new stories.

unfortunately yiff

unfortunately yiff #6 · Jun 3rd, 2019 · 4 · · 1. A Thread On The Ground ·

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“Hello there,” said a voice from the shade, making Fluttershy jump.

general kenobi!

Cosmic_Crisp

Cosmic_Crisp #7 · Jun 22nd, 2019 · 3 · · 1. A Thread On The Ground ·

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9659372
You are a bold one.

Flutter-Spark

Flutter-Spark #8 · Jul 7th, 2019 · · · 3. A New Form ·

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*licks lips* Delightfully tangy descriptions, a sweet and succulent dose of character development, and a satisfyingly beautiful plot. These are the ingredients of what may be one of the best Mature stories I’ve read so far on the site. Well done, Withania.
Perhaps we could see a sequel, hmm? I, for one, love the way you write.
Also, my old offer still stands, and I’ve got two characters now that you could choose from.

Prismfire Productions

Prismfire Productions #9 · Jul 26th, 2019 · 1 · · 3. A New Form ·

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Despite my arachnophobia...

This was well done

Scoutboy25

Scoutboy25 #10 · Aug 30th, 2019 · · · 1. A Thread On The Ground ·

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She selected an opening between the shrubs and stole into the undergrowth, keeping her head low. Immediately the sigh of the wind through the outer edges of the trees was muffled and she suddenly felt incredibly closed in. But nothing terrible happened, so she crept a little further forward until she had penetrated the outer barrier of the forest. The bushes thinned out slightly, not into a path, but enough that she wasn’t having to push past the denser foliage. Her gamble paid off, and already she could spot bushes that hadn’t yet been stripped off their juicy fruits. Glancing around whilst she opened her saddlebag, Fluttershy could hear the distinct noises and cries of wildlife, some she knew, and some she didn’t. Nothing seemed to be close by, so she started picking off fruits and stowing them away with a soft rustle. It seemed odd that this particular spot was so devoid of animal life, since there was plenty of easily attainable food here,. bBut she pushed the thought from her mind. - Sshe was barely a minute or two from the path, hardly in the forest-proper at all. Most likely animals prefered to stay deeper into the woods where their respective sanctuaries were easier to get to.

There's some issues here
One is that it's supposed to be preferred
And another is the formatting and spelling issues.
Possible fix: ...attainable food here. But she pushed the thought from her mind. She was barely a minute or two...

Withania