Single, nerdy, and eccentric stallion, Comet Burst, had always had a talent for repelling available ladies. Trying his luck on a blind dating game, he ends up getting paired with Ms. Harshwhinny. What could possibly go wrong?
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Yeah, I'll bite. It seems to go down a familiar road but is written well and I rather like Comet Burst so far.
A love story with a tsundere Harshwhinny and an excentric OC.
Interesting.
9643791
Glad you like him so far. Hopefully this story will be able to hold your attention. I'm still trying to figure out the entire story.
9644358
I honestly have a weakness for tsunderes and Harshwhinny definitely came across as one. To me, anyway.
Any chance for my sweet Harshwhinny. Lookin' good so far.
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Thanks!
Harshwhinny needs more love. And that avatar of the grumpy gorl is adorabru! ;w;
He... sounds pretty manipulative in this one, always saying the good thing at the right time.
Is is planned or sheer excentricity ?
I'll see.
9670022
Does he? Didn't mean for him to come across as that. He's definitely not the manipulative type. XD
9644911
Fixed your typo.
9696029
Adorabru AND professional! How's that? :P
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OK, this is a really cute story and can't wait to read more.
9710916
Thank you so much!
Snagged me at Harshwhinny and I enjoyed the rest that followed thoroughly. Can't wait 'till the next chapter!
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Awesome! Thankies! How can one not love Harshwhinny?
9711289
No idea, but she's definitely a favourite of mine. Love your portrayal of her as with this Comet Burst character of yours! They're cute, in a way. They fit together so oddly, but y'all make it work out and I really want to see them gradually become more than "acquaintances" as she put lmfao.
9711297
Comet Burst has been in existence since 2011 and it's about time I do more with him. I'm really into the whole opposites attract thing. x3
9711298
2011? Jeez, my oldest character is from 2012 and I basically never write him, anymore. But I digress, you're making it work so far and I'm excited for you to continue lol
9711303
I'm glad to have the reassurance that my effort is providing entertainment. I have more old characters that need love, but one project at a time. XD
9711311
I get that, don't wanna spread yourself too thin while working! But I'm gonna leave it here. I don't wanna prove too much of a distraction for you lol; looking forward to any and all updates!
9711315
It's all good! I'm not working on the next chapter at the moment. I'll do that later. Kinda burned after finishing the artwork that went with it.
9711328
All of the pieces featured in this story are from you as well? Jeez. Here I was thinking you were just commissioning them or something akin to that. That's awesome! Makes sense you'd end up burning the writer's flame though; doing both literature and art takes a lot out of a person. Enjoy your time away while you can lol
9711333
Yep, I did all the art in this thang too. Lineart is especially a pain for me, but it's worth it.
9711342
I believe it, I struggle with everything except for minimalism, but it's good to see you can do it so well! Might inspire me to try again with actual works instead of just flat imagery
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You can do it! Comet Burst believes in you! :D
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Thanks for the vote of confidence, Comet xD I'll be sure to try arting again when I can. Until then, I'll keep up to tabs on your story and such!
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Cool beans! And thanks for the watch!
9711355
Of course, of course! Y'all definitely deserve it lol
9711365
I really appreciate it! <3
Refusing to show weakness by acknowledging the soup is hot seems like exactly the kind of thing Ms. Harshwhinny would do. :)
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And Comet is impressed by her...
GUTS.
i.imgur.com/AKExOYh.gif
Aw, even the indomitable Harshie-poo got bullied... nice to see she moved on, utterly assured of her own superiority.
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Of course! She is superior to spoiled, shallow fillies. :3
It's rather adorable to see things progressing in such a matter. It's believable to be sure; I look forward to seeing where you take this!
9791618
Thank you very much! Trying to make the relationship believable and glad it's working out. ^.^
9791712
It's VERY believable, one of the reasons I enjoy the story. Both have their separate barriers to showing any sort of affection, but little moments that slowly creep up on each is both amusing and logical!
9791742
Harshy's barriers must go down! XD
9791768
Looks like Comet is already in the denial stage....Harsh is at....advanced denial!
EVENTUALLY!
9791773
He's just trying to figure it out cuz he's a dummy. x3
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But when he figures it out, oh I feel so bad for our poor awkward friend!
I gathered that he's pretty oblivious; hence the 'I dunno' moment.
9791786
He's so awkward! Someone help him!
9791803
I think he's beyond outside help....at least for now. More than likely I could see it all coming crashing down....and then poor Harsh is just going to wonder why he's flustered beyond all reason EVERY time they're together.
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We shall see what happens... >:3
9791810
....Oh no. The evil face.
RUN COMET RUN!
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There is no escape! I control him!
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Ack, cyoot!
I is ded of cyoot.
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Now you're a zombie! :D
Hope to see an update soon! Really enjoying this story
IT's been so long! I knew if I waited I'd be rewarded!