Twilight decides to stick herself out there and try to make some more friends. She knew she'd probably meet some strangers but what she didn't expect was the stranger she met to be so... Strange.
My entry into the Monster Mares story contest. Staring my version of a Kuchisake Onna, translated to English it means slit-mouthed women, a type of Yokai from Japanese Folklore. Here's a Link to where I researched this type of Yokai so anyone who wants to learn more about these fascinating supernatural beings is able to. Enjoy. Yokai-nda have to look for them. ;P
I rated it Teen because I'm not 100% sure it's An E for Everyone. Also if you spot any tags that I missed please let me know and I'll fix that right away.
I hope you all enjoy.
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If my plans hold out I was thinking of turning this into a small series with Spike as the main character, going around Ponyville and the surrounding areas finding and learning about the various Yokai. Though it's not concrete yet so don't expect it anytime soon. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
With Drunklight side stories?
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Now that is something I can completely get behind. If I do get around to doing it I will include a few of those, maybe as Omake or a couple of side stories.
HA!
...So, where'd Spike meet his new friends?
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Trim has always been there and Nimble's origin I would get into if I did the mini-series.
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Dude, I'd read that in a heartbeat.
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Glad to know someone would enjoy it.
If I said that your suggestion for the mini-series was giving me vibes of "Spike as Kitaro from GeGeGe no Kitaro", how far off the mark would I be from your idea? This story was great. I'd love to read any future stories you might make off of your mini-series / sequel idea.
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A little. I've only had the pleasure of watching a few episodes so I don't know much about the show, much to my sadness. If I had to put a vibe to it I'd say the series would be more akin to 'My life with a Monster girl' only without the sexual stuff and a bit of extra craziness. it'd be a slice of life series centered around 'what does Spike do when The Mane 6 aren't around' it's not touched on as much what Spike does in his downtime.
So my idea was, 'What if Spike took after his studious big sister and started studying something? What if he met a certain tiny arachnid while he was looking for something to study and stumbled into an entire hidden world?'. At least that what I started with, it might very well change by the time I put pen to paper so to speak.
Also, I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I'm always happy to hear when something I've written is enjoyed by someone else.
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Oooo.... Monster Musume. Great show! Looking forward to what comes of this.
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you'll just have to wait and see.
neat story
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Thanks, glad you liked it enough to favorite it.