Equestria a world filled with magic and wonder, where pastel colored anthro ponies and many other mythical creatures roam. But when an unknown force sends a being from a different universe to Equestria, life as the ponies knew it would change.
i never got around to reading the original so this is essentially new to me so i am excited to see where this goes. in the original you had goku in the picture with Dash but unless this is an extreme AU the fact the main character has his tail and can fly tells me this is not Goku. also the fact that he didn't A. try to make friends with them or B. challenge the strongest among them to a fight.
“Hey wait!” Soarin called out from across the room after he had noticed Spitfire was starting to get a little chummy with his wingmate. “I wanted that promotion! I’ve been here way longer than her, don’t I deserve it?”
“Heh, maybe next time.” Spitfire laughed as he abandoned Fleetfoot mid-sentence
Damn fine start but DBZ + MLP = WTF This is going to be amazing or blow up... Hopefully without Equis... The planet killer/devistating rate in DBZ dont mix well here
nice work.
i never got around to reading the original so this is essentially new to me so i am excited to see where this goes. in the original you had goku in the picture with Dash but unless this is an extreme AU the fact the main character has his tail and can fly tells me this is not Goku. also the fact that he didn't A. try to make friends with them or B. challenge the strongest among them to a fight.
bit of editing needed here
Why is spitfire saying crash instead dash?
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It's her Wonderbolt nickname.
Damn fine start but DBZ + MLP = WTF This is going to be amazing or blow up... Hopefully without Equis... The planet killer/devistating rate in DBZ dont mix well here
This was a awesome and funny start to this fic can't wait to see where it goes.
You could use some edits here and there, but not a bad start.
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The first chapters unfortunately I didn't have an editor at the time.