it feels a bit rushed ,we went from them going to eat something at the end of last chapter to him creating a behemoth and killing changelings .You should probably work on smoother transitions .If you want you could read some other stories with a lot of likes since they're usually the best (except for clop)

I like Titus Bruz (just not with the betrayal thing hope you removed that)

whats next you gonna make like a small fast logistics drone thing and give them the personality of ratbag just with less conspiring contrivances cause that would be nice

9693436
Who is Titus Bruz? also, the second A.I. will be more along the lines of VEGA from Doom.

More words in chapters !!!

9693541
I forgot the comma its that you made the character Titus act and with the way his words are sounds like Bruz from lord of the rings; shadow of war the first captain you dominate is an olog named Bruz

9693694
I understand now. Thanks for clarification

9679516
hello, private message me, I know a way you can find his old fic

any updates before 2020? or no?

9967488
Probably not been busy with college/work/holiday shit

9968598
k

9984398
https://youtu.be/ygE01sOhzz0

no more updates

that just sucks

10059447
My computer died saving for new one it’s a pain typing on phone

10059904
?

I like this more pls

10059904
update sometime this century please

10385848
helllllooooooooooo?

10428020
yo ya ever gonna reply? or are ya jus gonna deny, seriously, respond to comments my guy, its rude af to ignore them, moreso when your readers are tryna talk to ya about a story they love, so whats the situation here, story dead? story paused for a few years? story cancened? update soon? what one is it, pick one my boi

I’m sad to see this cancelled it has potential and thought it was doing well

juagernot

good story are you going to come back or is it dead

I hope you continue