Sundance and his friends prove their worth to their new Clan, wanting nothing more than to bring justice to the galaxy and put an end to the cruelty of Clan Draconequus. However; when a new enemy enters the fight, things take a turn for the worst.
Well this is a fun story so far, I feel that the story is off on a good start and settled a most of the issues or questions that a reader might wonder of the inner workings of the world, like the test of how to joining another clan, or leaning a little more about the other commanders back story more, along with tidbits about the history of the clans about Equestria (which is a massive improvement), like Obsidian who is the best character in the story as a mentor sort of character. For Discord, I wonder what is his plan for vengeance against Celestia, through I wonder what he seems to have against Equestria or it's government or even Vengeance who was created by the destruction of three ponies and ordered to kill all ponies, or is it ordered to rule to undermined it, not clear how it would managed that. I do like the idea that Discord is evil again, though I wonder if it for revenge against all ponies or is it just the exhilaration of being at full power again. I wonder if Celestia knew that Discord is lose or that she saw something else that needed her direct attention more.
So far I really love the test Sundance and the other have to go trough and I love the details you putting into it, keep up the good work.
I wonder how the story will develop.
Comment posted by Black--Soul deleted Oct 16th, 2021
Just noticed it will come back to you soon.
Well this is a fun story so far, I feel that the story is off on a good start and settled a most of the issues or questions that a reader might wonder of the inner workings of the world, like the test of how to joining another clan, or leaning a little more about the other commanders back story more, along with tidbits about the history of the clans about Equestria (which is a massive improvement), like Obsidian who is the best character in the story as a mentor sort of character. For Discord, I wonder what is his plan for vengeance against Celestia, through I wonder what he seems to have against Equestria or it's government or even Vengeance who was created by the destruction of three ponies and ordered to kill all ponies, or is it ordered to rule to undermined it, not clear how it would managed that. I do like the idea that Discord is evil again, though I wonder if it for revenge against all ponies or is it just the exhilaration of being at full power again. I wonder if Celestia knew that Discord is lose or that she saw something else that needed her direct attention more.
So far I really love the test Sundance and the other have to go trough and I love the details you putting into it, keep up the good work.
I wonder how the story will develop.