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A short story that I had come up with after seeing the Hearts and Hooves day episode.


Even though Applejack has never had a special somepony on Hearts and Hooves day doesn't mean that no pony does and that's why Applejack has agreed to help Pinkie Pie with some major baking during the holiday considering the amount of business that Sugar Cube Corner sees. After talking with Pinkie and working through a day full of shenanigans, emotions, tears and memories,the Element of Honesty finds that there may actually be a special sompony just for her.

Rated teen for possible romantic situations in later chapters, and also for the feels.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 23 )

I know how hard it is to get a story started...so here is a comment, a fave, and a like.

Lots of potential and I personally can't wait for future installments :twilightsmile:

:pinkiegasp: I wonder who it is :raritywink: Looking forward to the next chapter... :twilightsmile:

Seems interesting, keep writing.

*cough cough* I could be that special somepony.. :moustache:

Ummmm... a bit short. But at least its going towards the direction of a happy ending. I think.

Great story so far :3 I'll be waiting eagerly for the next chapter... Keep up the good work :twilightsmile:

Thank you all for the support! I'll be adding more shortly, I'm hoping to add some length to the next chapter. Any criticism is very appreciated!

:ajsmug:

*bounces about gleefully* It IS it IS it IS it iS! It IS a RARIJACK!

I expected that. More than most know. Still great. Can't wait for the next one. :twilightsmile:

RariJack? You sir are the creator of a rare commodity. And I love how this is going!

Only one complaint I have is the fact that this chapter seems a touch unfinished.

So Dash was the special pony Pinkie mentioned earlier. Wonder if this will become a triangle or will Pinkie try to help her Dashie out (or both)?

I'm going to feel sad over whichever pony gets dumped for the other :fluttercry: But a RariJack would be interesting.

my only reaction to the twist> :pinkiegasp:
I have said enough

You my friend know how to keep things interesting. Best thing about returning from holiday is seeing this new chapter. Loved it. :pinkiehappy:



:eeyup:

That's one hard buck to the muzzle...

Hey Echoes,

Great to see a new chapter. Really digging the character of RD here, very in character for her. I hope you aren't just teasing us all with this and that you are taking it off hiatus. So excited for more :pinkiehappy:


:eeyup:

2312287 Thanks Sugar Moon! I'm hoping to have another substantial chapter up soon.

Hopefully the next chapter will be as interesting if not more so than the others! :pinkiehappy:

And you end with a cliffhanger. WHAT IS WITH ALL THE BLOODY CLIFFHANGERS?!

The feels man, the feels.

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