1084156 1082902 A magic migraine mixed with a concussion makes anypony grumpy. Hopefully, I conveyed her foggy and inattentive POV mixed with agony that she couldn't show. Since she lost to Chrysalis any sign of weakness would seriously harm her remaining authority.
I think discord is starting to mellow out and think logically. Why is he seeing his vision as a starlite sky? Why not a pot of gravy and flies swimming in it wearing bikinis?
I particularly liked the way Rarity's response to Luna's "light and casual" note without too much formality involves every imaginable title for herself that she could scrounge up.
I don't often comment on older fics, particularly non-ending chapters thereof, but the Latin in this one drew my attention. (One wonders why Latin crops up in ponyfic so much more than, say, Greek, and speculates that it might be simply that "Roman" is easier to horsepun than "Hellenic".) Diei Invicta... Haven't seen that one before, but if my internet translator is working right it does seem apropos; "day" rather than the usual "sun". Per ardua ad astra... "Through difficulties to the stars" is a curious choice for a Luna motto; is the intended sense something like "I work hard to bring you this night"? "Returned and redeemed" is very nice, although I personally might have gone with que rather than et to emphasize the parallelism. I do wonder whether she puts that on her non-EoH correspondence; I daresay Twilight would take it as a thank-you, but I could see other ponies thinking of it as a "no, really, I'm good now!" smokescreen.
Woohoo, two updates in a day. (nevermind how short one was.)
I never knew Celestia was such a huge bitch. Neat!
Oh, and you got a bit of an italics problem there.
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Thanks, I fixed it.
MAKE THEM LONGER !!!
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Wait, is the Princess loosing her colors ?
“The contrast in size makes thine flank appear quite copious," Burn.
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A magic migraine mixed with a concussion makes anypony grumpy. Hopefully, I conveyed her foggy and inattentive POV mixed with agony that she couldn't show. Since she lost to Chrysalis any sign of weakness would seriously harm her remaining authority.
To be honest, when I read the word gobsmacked, i laughed. I never heard the word before and it just made me laugh.
I think discord is starting to mellow out and think logically. Why is he seeing his vision as a starlite sky? Why not a pot of gravy and flies swimming in it wearing bikinis?
“Ohhh, clever girl. Your're even more fun than last time.”
I Like this Discord
Awesome letter-writing!
I particularly liked the way Rarity's response to Luna's "light and casual" note without too much formality involves every imaginable title for herself that she could scrounge up.
I don't often comment on older fics, particularly non-ending chapters thereof, but the Latin in this one drew my attention. (One wonders why Latin crops up in ponyfic so much more than, say, Greek, and speculates that it might be simply that "Roman" is easier to horsepun than "Hellenic".) Diei Invicta... Haven't seen that one before, but if my internet translator is working right it does seem apropos; "day" rather than the usual "sun". Per ardua ad astra... "Through difficulties to the stars" is a curious choice for a Luna motto; is the intended sense something like "I work hard to bring you this night"? "Returned and redeemed" is very nice, although I personally might have gone with que rather than et to emphasize the parallelism. I do wonder whether she puts that on her non-EoH correspondence; I daresay Twilight would take it as a thank-you, but I could see other ponies thinking of it as a "no, really, I'm good now!" smokescreen.