Hey! You! Motherbucker! Stop doin all that crack!
I was just trying to escape the voices. I tried everything in my power to get rid of them. And now I've sent myself to another world entirely. A beautiful, peaceful world. How, I'm unsure. But with my arrival came something far worse than the voices. Something that could consume everything in sight. I've endangered everything here. I'm terrified of it. I can't look at it without passing out. But I'm the only one who can destroy it. I have to destroy it. I will destroy it.
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So, you want criticism? Here it is.
THIS IS FUCKING AWESOME!
I have never seen a story about humanized ponies that were still in Equestria that I liked, but this seems pretty good.
Thanks.
I'll try to write up to your expectations.
MOAR!
Settle down, brah. Settle down.
Freaking Awesome. I demand moar.
And more ye shall have...
MOAR! And, when I say that I don't mean to run yourself ragged publishing 10 million chapters a day.
Wow cant wait for next part
Yes about time spike all your hard work has paid of
next day Twilight and rarity find spikes check list of how to get a kiss from rarity
Wow that was unexpected
hmm evil shall rise
Indeed it shall... Indeed it shall...
cuz he's a jerkyface McCrapinyourpinata kinda demon.
Awesome.
is good story.
berry punch on the dance floor
Lunas grand entrance
nobody's awkward moment
wat a
!
for a supposed magic user he's only used necromancy once the entire story
yeah, I agree. I can't say I don't regret having him use it more that once, but it will occur again in the future of the story, and it will be so, so cool, if I do say so myself.
Bum... Bum... BUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUMMMMMMMMMMM.
+
I'll give you a hint:
OH SHI-! CUPCAKES!
Pinkie: Heyyyy there Perception Filter. You wanna make some cupcakes?
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! *Runs screaming for the hills*.
Pinkie: *Shrug*
Heh, heh, heh, heh... AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! eeyup.
YAY!
Listen, guys. I regret to inform you that due to some... difficulties, the next few chapters will not be coming along as swiftly as all the others have
Yeah, I'm sorry about this 
. I assure you, though, they will be up in the kinda-maybe-sorta near future. Have a mustache: 
y he no use necromancy?!?
settle down, it's coming up soon.
I really like moustaches.
Dame!!!!! boy you got beyatch slapped
I....I fucking LOVE YOU! YOU, are not afraid to kill of any of the main characters and I fucking love that.
Finally! The premise of him being a necromancer is being used instead of mentioned once or twice at the begining!
Yeah, it's about time.
You heard me: statue-throwing.
I like this guy. Vessinia, I mean. Not the soul eating part, the not really giving a fuck part.
Time for possible lichdom?
... I demand that you finish this story. I DEMAND it!
Sorry I made you guys wait, like, a month or something for this chapter--really, I am. I just got caught up with school shtuff and whatnot. I hope that doesn't happen again. For your sake, of course.
Perception, I
moustache
you a question: Do you sit in front of your computer waiting for my updates or something? that was relatively quick...
Looked interesting at first but then...humanized ponies
. Without ponies there's no point to a fim story... Should have made a original fic.
If there were ponies in it, it would have been like just about all the other human-in-equestria-where-the-human-is-the-only-one-who-can-save-the-world stories. And the tag "Alternate universe" is up there for a reason. If you're going to downvote my story, do it for the right reasons, not because there's a little plot device (which, by the way is comparatively original to other HiE stories) that you, specifically, aren't completely content with. I'm not bothered by one extra dislike on this, I'm bothered by the reasoning.
P.S.- For future reference, if you don't want to see some fanfic with something like this, then be wary of the large "Alternate universe" tag in big white lettering by the title.
WOOO! First.
Anyways,
This is the coolest fucking thing i've
ever read.
Cool. Thanks, man. I dedicate this following moustache to you.
Human ponies? Unfaved.
Next time, warn the readers in the description.
I hope you're happy, readers. I spent three weeks making this chapter as awesome as I could; I hope it was worth it!
Warning demons have a tendency to drag you to hell
DA FUQ?!!?
Moar!
I'm not sure if that's a good "DA FUQ?!!?" or a bad "DA FUQ?!!?"
Well, I was waiting for more of this.
You are scary quick...
Nooo after everything he has been through