I stopped reading after checking out this chapter after seeing it on the latest updates page. I'm going to post an excerpt:

>Twilight Sparkle the princess of friendship along with the other elements of harmony expect who was Twilight's student stayed back at the castle along the the young dragon spike who was like Twilight's little brother.

They were being escorted by four solar guards in gold armor armed with swords and spears. The young princess had many thoughts going threw her head, many theory's on why she was summoned to her highness.

In the first two paragraphs, you have a run-on sentence and multiple typos. It's evident that you aren't proofreading, when you really should be.

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Just by reading the first 2 quotes you have, i can already tell celestia is a blind arrogant ruler. it's a lone human, which means you had to have gone way out of your way to gather an army and attack HIM. this battle is self defense on the humans part. and they claim him evil? worse, 70 percent of the entire army is gone, and celestia STILL plans to continue the assault? the fuck tia...?

Eeyup, Tia's not exactly being smart here.

"I fear that a new war is on it's way, with the dark wizard Zeref." Luna the night goddess said with a bit of fear and held the most serious expression that anypony alive would see. "We face a completely different threat that would slay us all within days." she said once more.

This shocked everyone, how could the end of Equestria is nearing? Many thought on how powerful this Zeref creature was, that somehow escape tartarus? This news shocked everybody to the core in the room Fluttershy was almost bursting into tears if not for Rarity who held her in a warm embrace.

"P-please t-t-tell me it's n-not t-true." sequeled Fluttershy with tears dripping from her eyes.

Sorry Flutters, but it us....

"This can't be!" roaed Lance who stepped forward to the princess with fire in his eyes while his claws dug into the ground below him. "This must be some sort of sick joke!"

Eenope, it most certainly is not.

"It is not, i fear." Celestia said while she looked down, her eyes filled with hopelessness. "This foe, is like nothing you have ever seen or faced before." she said as she trotted over to her former student. "This...creature is like a monster with a never ending thirst for blood." the sun goddess said with even more fear in her eyes.

"Pony princess is right!" Prince Rutherford the yak stated. As his deadpan stare turned into one of regret and pain. "That monster! Kill many Yak! Yak can't fight it even with big numbers!" this new information made the seven ponys more shock lossing all hope at this point. Luna then stepped forward looking at the main six.

"That is why we must use the elements! With thu power of friendship we'll win this war by stoning the horror forever!" yelled Luna in her canterlot voice.

"Y-yes princess Luna! We'll not fail you!" yelled Twilight who also used the canterlot voice.

You guys can do it, I know you can!!!

"Where is it! Where is it?!" yelled Twilight as she ran to the nearest book shelf looking for the book.

They just had gotten yet another letter from Celeista that the pillers and StarSwirl would be meeting with them at her castle. In the letter it also said to get the book of Equestria's history book.

While the princess of friendship looked threw out the library Starlight and Spike were shock at the news, about the up coming war.

"So, does this mean school is canceled? Send all the students home?" Spike asked while Starlight nodded.

"We'll need to send them all home, to be with there family's, we can handle what's coming next! I hope." Starlight said as she walked out of the throne room along with Spike.

No need hive innocent civilians involved in this.

A guard in gold armor walked into the throne room before bowing. "Your highness, King Jack, StarSwirl and his party is here." said the guard. As Twilight nodded.

"Please send them in! You can go back to your post." Twilight said as the guard nodded bowing once more before walking off as King Jack the king of the deer kingdom walked in in his royal armor with two guards and the pillers next to him.

"Princess Twilight Sparkle, a honor to meet you." the King said bowing to her as Twilight did the same. After they all got to know one another they all sat around the throne table looking at the map and the book that Twilight had just found.

Watch this than read the rest of the story please. https://youtu.be/cXLwgFCcUdc

"Alright now that we-" StarSwirl was cut off by a set of doors being slammed open as a guards men ran in.

"Your highness! There's a problem!" yelled the guard's pony. StarSwirl glared at the guard pony and slammed his hoof down.

"What is it?! Can't you see we are in an important meeting!" yelled StarSwirl as the guard's man nodded.

"Y-yes sir but we have an intruder! And-" the guard's men was cut off as the place all over ponyville flashed with many lights all over the village, castle and school before a long pause than it all at once blew up into flames.

Oh no, HE'S HERE!!!

As the buildings all fell apart into the guard as screams of horror could be heard as everything went up in flames the buildings all falling into the earth.

After the rumble settled down a groan came from the fallen castle as Twilight slowly stood up holding her head as blood dripped into the floor from her nose and head.

Looking to the side and seeing Starlight who was not far from her laid as Twilight groaned. "Starlight, get up. We're under attack and i can't do this alone." Twilight said as she slowly stood and walked over to Starlight and picked her up. "Starlight? Oh my Celeista, she's dead."

D-d-d-ddead?!

!!!

Twilight said as she gently placed the body on the floor looking around seeing many bodys of guards and her friends than she heard a groan and her name.

"Tw-ilight." said a injured StarSwirl who's lower half was crushed under a huge piece of the castle.

"S-starSwirl?" said Twilight as she fell to her knees looking at the wizard.

Twilight...STARLIGHT!!!!

"Twilight, we're not out of danger." StarSwirl said as a hand slammed his head to the ground as Twilight went wide eyed. A what looks like a man with a yellow furr ears and tail with sharp teeth and claws stood above StarSwirl.

JACKAL!!!

"Your not supposed to be alive! The other's played along but I guess you'll need some conversing!" the demon said with a crazy rough voice as he looked at StarSwirl his hand glowing as StarSwirls body began to blow. "Explosions."

"Let him go you monster!" yelled Twilight as StarSwirl looked at Twilight.

"Twilight. Run. There's no reason for you do die with the rest of us!" StarSwirl said as Twilight closed her eyes tears falling into the ground.

The demon than looked up at Twilight. "The names Jackel by the way! One of the nine demons of Tartaros! Tell that to your friends in hell!" he said as Twilight shot her eyes open once more as StarSwirl closed his eyes.

"Run now! Find what justice means to you and protect it until the every end! That's an order!" yelled StarSwirl before the explosion spell activated.

"STARSWIRL!" Twilight yelled before the place were the two were exploded once more.

NOOOOOOO, STARSWIRL!!!

Twilight Sparkle the princess of friendship along with the other elements of harmony expect who was Twilight's student stayed back at the castle along the the young dragon spike who was like Twilight's little brother.

Not fond of how Spike missed out on directly meeting the royals and missed out on directly knowing the news all due to they made him stay behind...

Is he still alive..?