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Revluc_The_Pony
Lest We Forget A writer that should write things... Possibly should write something... Yes, I'm going to write something.
Revluc_The_Pony
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Wow I guess even Celestia can be paranoid about ponies what type of Panzer is it? A tiger?
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That is a good question. Well, so far right now that is published is the Panzer IV. (I won't be giving spoilers.) But the Tiger will be in a near future chapter. And, thank you for the question; it is much appreciated.
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No problem I always like these kinds of redemption stories
Well, this is an interesting universe you have created, to say the least. Though I’m afraid it’s going to be hard to immerse many readers in it—not because of the WW2 stuff. I’m not a war enthusiast myself, but still understood everything clearly in this regard.
Also, noticed some tense inconsistencies and such, but your grammar seems to be pretty solid in general.
It’s the story’s execution that seems to be a problem. What I have seen was very fast-paced, the whole chapter filled with rather short sentences that were sometimes rather loosely connected, shoving a lot of information to the reader in large amounts, possibly too large. There was so much that I remember only a fraction of what the main character said, and I’m afraid I won’t be alone in this regard
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Thank you. I'm planning on doing a major fix and make the chapters longer, and change the tense from present to past. Past tense is better. Never used Past Tense in writing before. So, I just hope it goes well. I learned my grammar from reading a lot and the rules of writing.
I made a longer one. Sorry if it reads bad. Writer block got off my back and I was really happy to write something.
i take a little offens in that (xD), but the rest is okay. Yeah a little hard to read, but not that bad. i see forward for another chapter in some time ^^
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He has issues.