A young Dusk Shine grows immensely curious about something concerning the opposite sex. Maybe his sister will be a willing to help him with his quandary... or not. At least, not at first.
9577867 Oh, don't think me a prude, friend. I have written a fic with somnophilia before - and have discussed the issue within the comments of that fic - and a fic with rape in it before. However, the quandary with the somnophilia in this fic is that Dusk didn't know what he was doing, ergo, 'accident.' I'm not trying to distance myself from the act, nor imply I'm justifying it. And yes, I do realise the conflict of interest with it and the romance tag, but Gleaming's character understood what an naive idiot her brother was and ergo, the justifiable case for the romance tag. So, yeah. I'm not trying to distance myself, deny or imply anything with that comment, I thought I trying to partake in banter, but eh.
Funnily enough, in the other fic I mentioned above, someone commented that I was too negative with the depiction of the fetish. Sometimes, there's no pleasing people.
9577892 Well if that's what is upsetting you I'll add the tag, apologies. I won't add dark due to the context however. I hope you forgive me for my negligence. If you see from my other stories where such things occur I have tagged it as such, it's not something I blatantly downplay or ignore. I know what rape it, it's not a very black and white issue. I was just thinking with context in mind.
9577867 If you wanna get hyper technical, Gleaming raped Dusk in chapter 2 since he's under-age. This creates a double negative and therefore no rape occurred at all. Fact!
9577978 I feel no animosity towards him, and I do apologise if I came off as such. Edit: Please do not leave dislikes on Buster's comments he was only trying to help. Thank you.
9577989 You realize that the mods have to approve the story becoming publicly available right? That means that if it was actually necessary they would have told the author to add it before it was approved. Unless of course you're trying to imply the mods aren't doing their jobs and will punish users for their own incompetence?
9579559 Haha, yes. Whilst I understand your aversion, there is a competition going on, one which I wished to participate in. Getting into the featured box was a mere up-tick of fortune for me. However, it does put forward a notion. If you do not wish to see smut, there is an option to hide said smut. I use it at least once a day to see what made it into the featured box that isn't clop, but you can have it on permanently if you wish. This is one of those instances where I don't feel obligated to apologise. But, I only hope you're not too upset. 9578390 The third chapter is going to be a timeskip. As for spin offs and continuations, that isn't yet something I'll consider. I have a lot of other things to get around to first. Believe me, I have a lot of sequel ideas, and they typically come right after I finish a fic. I am having fun writing these gender-switched characters, and may do something with them again in the future.
The door creaked open, unsurprisingly, and Dusk Shine grimaced. The first line of defence had failed. Now he’d have to rely on the cushiony walls, the robust blankets, and his own will, to keep him safe. Gleaming, meanwhile, looked upon her brother’s ‘fortress’ with bemusement, closing the door with her hind leg. It was four individual pillows forming some of a lidless box around her young sibling, a thin purple blanket was tossed on top. An admirable attempt, she had to admit.
He. Was. Ready!
Are you really?
Dusk Shine’s smile was gone, and he feared forever; his sunken eyes hollow, going over every single thing the mare revealed to him. She was excruciating in her detail. He now knew the purpose of her bits, and the purpose of his, yet this knowledge came at the most horrific of costs: his innocence. He looked up Gleaming, his mouth opening and closing as he tried to formulate a sentence. None came. Was this the burden of forbidden knowledge? A part of him wished that he had never stared into the abyssal chasm of his sister’s cunt… vagina.
Yup. I think my subconscious somehow knew this was going to happen.
“Yeah… no,” she replied flatly. Although, this was Dusk they were talking about. She wouldn’t have been surprised if the colt had sported a stiffy in the past and thought it was just an elaborate and fleshy book stand for leisurely reading.
Not much better, arguably, but that was up for debate.
*shrug*
“So you’ll sex me?” Dusk asked, hopeful.
He still hasn't lost all his innocence, though.
Dusk did nothing as Gleaming kissed him. He didn’t shrink away or move his lips, he just let the moment embrace him, like a soft hug. They were soft, almost as soft as the lips between her legs, yet his lips pressed to the one’s on her face was more captivating for the young colt. Even though she held it for a mere few seconds, the moment felt as though it lasted hours for him; the fleeting contact was surreal, feeling like a dream, his heart adorned with butterfly wings, his belly tied with myriad knots...
We have a romantic!
She was lucky not to be in oestrus.
To be fair, though, I don't think his sperm is developed enough to fertilize.
... Wait, strike that. With his big cock, I need to throw that thought out the window.
“I love you,” Dusk interrupted quietly, gently rising and falling, his body dragging him unwillingly to sleep. He was all tuckered out.
Gleaming continued to stroke her brother’s head, smiling at him tenderly even though he couldn’t see. They had to come apart at some point. To take his dick from her, clean up their messes, never talk of this again. That fact seemed tragic to her, but she couldn’t imagine how the two would live continuing such a thing... but, for the time being, she was contented to just lay there. Dusk in her arms, gently breathing as he was drawn into his dreams – no doubt they would be about her. And admittedly, she knew hers would be about him. “I love you too, Dusk,” she admitted in a whisper, planting a kiss on the top of his head as she too fell asleep...
9579737 If you go to the search page, you can filter by tag. Type -#fetish to filter out all stories with that tag. Same with any others you don't like.
I just wish there was a #futa tag so I could filter THAT out, but it's just lumped in with the others for some reason. You can sort by body type though, so using #Mlpfim, #EquestriaGirls, #Human, or #Anthro (or -#yougetthepicture to exclude them) can help refine them.
Pursing his lips, Dusk looked at his mysterious attachment, and started to follow his sister’s instruction. Because, of course, who else could he trust as much as his own sister? He began to poke at the sheath with the tip of his hoof. Under the turgid flesh, he felt his cock penis; the hard organ began to reach (respond) to his treatment, yet his way of going about it was apparently amusing the mare.
9592703 Thanks for pointing that out to me. In fact, that entire paragraph was just a brain fart. I have no idea how I didn't notice it. Thanks for pointing it out for me. I think mid writing it I got distracted, forgot I had started going off on another line of description, and continued writing elsewhere. Apologies.
This is psychotic, plan and simple. You sound like one of those moralizing dillweeds who think that if you make a racist joke than that means you endorse what was said. So in conclusion:
Well, Dusk didn’t even realize the implications of what he was doing, for one thing, so he didn’t exactly have a guilty conscience. No mens rea. No evil intent behind it. In other words, he is not culpable for his actions. It’s entirely different if someone commits a crime with the full knowledge that what they’re doing is wrong. We’re talking about a minor who didn’t even know the first thing about genitalia until after he’d already licked his sister’s pussy in her sleep. Proving a guilty conscience under these circumstances would be very difficult. It would also depend on Equestrian law and whether or not they have strict liability for cases like these. In all likelihood, it’s actually Gleaming who’d get in trouble for sex with a minor.
Dusk Shine’s smile was gone, and he feared forever; his sunken eyes hollow, going over every single thing the mare revealed to him. She was excruciating in her detail. He now knew the purpose of her bits, and the purpose of his, yet this knowledge came at the most horrific of costs: his innocence. He looked up Gleaming, his mouth opening and closing as he tried to formulate a sentence. None came. Was this the burden of forbidden knowledge? A part of him wished that he had never stared into the abyssal chasm of his sister’s cunt… vagina.
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Unintentional sleep rape
(With no penetration.)
But that's splitting hairs to be honest.
9577867
Oh, don't think me a prude, friend. I have written a fic with somnophilia before - and have discussed the issue within the comments of that fic - and a fic with rape in it before. However, the quandary with the somnophilia in this fic is that Dusk didn't know what he was doing, ergo, 'accident.' I'm not trying to distance myself from the act, nor imply I'm justifying it. And yes, I do realise the conflict of interest with it and the romance tag, but Gleaming's character understood what an naive idiot her brother was and ergo, the justifiable case for the romance tag. So, yeah. I'm not trying to distance myself, deny or imply anything with that comment, I thought I trying to partake in banter, but eh.
Funnily enough, in the other fic I mentioned above, someone commented that I was too negative with the depiction of the fetish. Sometimes, there's no pleasing people.
9577892
Well if that's what is upsetting you I'll add the tag, apologies. I won't add dark due to the context however. I hope you forgive me for my negligence. If you see from my other stories where such things occur I have tagged it as such, it's not something I blatantly downplay or ignore. I know what rape it, it's not a very black and white issue. I was just thinking with context in mind.
9577922
I appreciate the thought, sincerely. I recognise your concern and will be more diligent in the future.
9577867
If you wanna get hyper technical, Gleaming raped Dusk in chapter 2 since he's under-age. This creates a double negative and therefore no rape occurred at all. Fact!
9577951
If you wanna get mega-hyper-super-duper technical, rape is defined as
in the UK. Ergo, not a single act of rape occurred at all! (Joking.)
Well this was a perfect Dusk Shine clop story, I can'T wait to see the next chapter, keep it up.
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https://youtu.be/A9IlKM_3JSs
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Alright, settle down kids! We already get enough hate from the anti-cloppers. There's no call for us to be at each other's throats as well!
9577978
I feel no animosity towards him, and I do apologise if I came off as such.
Edit: Please do not leave dislikes on Buster's comments he was only trying to help. Thank you.
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9577989
Remember, not just the author sees your comments on the story.
Perhaps better suited as a PM in the future?
okay bruh, first i see you go make Femanon, and then you come and make Dusk Shine incest, like man, just take me already.
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I'm glad you liked it, that means a lot to me.
Is this fic going to include any intentional rape?
Asking before I put it on my "read later" list (which I don't use anyway but still).
9578136
No. Nopony gets raped in this aside from Dusk's questionable machinations on Gleaming in chapter 1. The tag is there solely for that.
9578146
Okay, thanks for letting me know. Added it to the list.
9578157
No problem. Enjoy.
9577989
You realize that the mods have to approve the story becoming publicly available right? That means that if it was actually necessary they would have told the author to add it before it was approved. Unless of course you're trying to imply the mods aren't doing their jobs and will punish users for their own incompetence?
You know that was a pretty fun read. Now I'm really curious to see that third chapter and possible future spin off. Keep up the good work.
<--- Sigh... Here we go again
>her disappointment was immeasurable, and her day had effectively been ruined
Wait a minute I know where this is from
9579559
Haha, yes. Whilst I understand your aversion, there is a competition going on, one which I wished to participate in. Getting into the featured box was a mere up-tick of fortune for me. However, it does put forward a notion. If you do not wish to see smut, there is an option to hide said smut. I use it at least once a day to see what made it into the featured box that isn't clop, but you can have it on permanently if you wish. This is one of those instances where I don't feel obligated to apologise. But, I only hope you're not too upset.
9578390
The third chapter is going to be a timeskip. As for spin offs and continuations, that isn't yet something I'll consider. I have a lot of other things to get around to first. Believe me, I have a lot of sequel ideas, and they typically come right after I finish a fic. I am having fun writing these gender-switched characters, and may do something with them again in the future.
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9579585
I see a button do disable 'mature content' However, I only want to disable fetish fics. But I dont see a button for that.
And no, I'm not not upset. People read what they want to read^^
Shame if I'm being honest //finger guns
Good show man, good show on this chapter and this story so far, loved it. 11/10 definite mmf.
Are you really?
Yup. I think my subconscious somehow knew this was going to happen.
*shrug*
He still hasn't lost all his innocence, though.
We have a romantic!
To be fair, though, I don't think his sperm is developed enough to fertilize.... Wait, strike that. With his big cock, I need to throw that thought out the window.
Nice romantic ending.
Lovely little story. Wonder how this moment affected their future relationships.
So did you intentionally use a line from the adult movie know as taboo. Ir was that coincidence?
9582688
Coincidence. I've never even heard of the film. I'll give it a look though.
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Really old flick starring kay parker. I discovered it on pure curiosity on retro erotica.
9579737
If you go to the search page, you can filter by tag. Type -#fetish to filter out all stories with that tag. Same with any others you don't like.
I just wish there was a #futa tag so I could filter THAT out, but it's just lumped in with the others for some reason. You can sort by body type though, so using #Mlpfim, #EquestriaGirls, #Human, or #Anthro (or -#yougetthepicture to exclude them) can help refine them.
9592703
Thanks for pointing that out to me. In fact, that entire paragraph was just a brain fart. I have no idea how I didn't notice it. Thanks for pointing it out for me. I think mid writing it I got distracted, forgot I had started going off on another line of description, and continued writing elsewhere. Apologies.
9577867
What the hell???
This is psychotic, plan and simple. You sound like one of those moralizing dillweeds who think that if you make a racist joke than that means you endorse what was said. So in conclusion:
9577867
Well, Dusk didn’t even realize the implications of what he was doing, for one thing, so he didn’t exactly have a guilty conscience. No mens rea. No evil intent behind it. In other words, he is not culpable for his actions. It’s entirely different if someone commits a crime with the full knowledge that what they’re doing is wrong. We’re talking about a minor who didn’t even know the first thing about genitalia until after he’d already licked his sister’s pussy in her sleep. Proving a guilty conscience under these circumstances would be very difficult. It would also depend on Equestrian law and whether or not they have strict liability for cases like these. In all likelihood, it’s actually Gleaming who’d get in trouble for sex with a minor.
Cute.
Nooooo. He was not ready
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