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AcidPanic
Aspiring hypno-smut author. Any sort of advice, ideas, suggestions, etc. are welcome. https://twitter.com/acid_panic
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Uh Oh, I wonder how Rarity will react to this if she ever finds out she was mind controls, I bet she will blow them up with her magic and the Princesses won't see anything wrong with what she did to them either.
I see the source of influence in this one and I like it.
I do encourage you to keep going with this one.
It's a great chapter, but the description kind of does this a disservice by being pretty vague. Hope to see more.
Alright, you have my attention.
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Fair point bud, I'll see if I can do something about that <3
9544355
glad to hear it!
9544267
thanks!
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I'm curious, why the name Recherche? It's just Research in french.
Aww geez, I'm all for some mind controlly sexy fun, but this is ruining Raritys life, that's just a bit uncomfortable. I'll follow for now, but if it continues like this I may drop the fic.
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Recherché means very rare in French. Source: https://www.dictionary.com/browse/recherche
Also, nice work on the fic!
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I'm sorry to hear that, If I'm honest things are likely to get worse before they get better, I think I tend to skew a bit dark, but thanks for giving it a chance!
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It’s actually a bizarre loan word in that in English it’s spelled identically complete with accent aigu (é) but means “very rare, exotic, of studied refinement or elegance; precious; affected; pretentious.”. Whereas you’re right in French it just means “research” which is a lot less applicable.
I kinda started with "I want her to have a stripper name" and worked backwards from there but "Rarity" and "Generosity" already sound stripper-ey and most of the other ones I came across that were related to them were either too generic or felt too similar, like "Charity". Also I shaved the accent cause I took French all through highschool and fuck than language.
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Fair.
I like this! I think it has a lot of potential, especially if you focus on a different character each chapter, maybe weaving them all together loosely. Perhaps you can put them all in unique, erotic situations, if that isn't already the plan. Enough of my giving input where it wasn't asked for! Good work, nice descriptions and flow. I hope you decide to keep going!
Good stuff,looking forward to the next one.
Well, this certainly has my attention.
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<3
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I didn't say this at the time but you basically read my mind with this comment, thanks for the support
I'm curious as to how long the anthology format will be kept up, or if the whole story will be like that, even when it starts to get to the end
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If it comes out the way i'm expecting plot should kinda "start happening" in the next chapter or so. I'd expect a couple more of these character specific chapters but it won't be the whole story
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Alright.
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I already can't wait to see who else is caught in their web, and who starts to uncover it.
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Thanks! I'll try not to disappoint :)
I made an account JUST to say this is absolutely FANTASTIC!!! Cannot wait to read more. :)
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This is the nicest comment I've ever gotten :')
I'm in the home stretch for Chapter 3 and stuff like this makes me really wanna hit that deadline! <3 Thanks
These kind of slow but subtle "mind control" stories are my favorite. The theme of the victims not knowing makes this very interesting.
Laughing at the description changes. No need to feel bad at being slow to deliver free words. You're just building anticipation.
I have no idea how I got here, but this was a surprisingly fun read :) I hope you keep going with it. You managed to write the situation as sinister without being cliched; the 'villainy' as it were, feels natural to read.
I hope that AJ is able to free Rarity and that Dash and Flutters are able to get free too, I wonder what DISCORD would say if he were to find out what was happening to them.
This is surprisingly fun. Good shit.
Whoever you go with next might I recommend a bit of BDSM?
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Unlikely to be the NEXT one but I could certainly see myself following up on this recommendation in the near-ish future!
Gotta say, my absolute favorite part of this how you portray otherwise ordinary interactions that suddenly but casually shift to sexy/evil. The entire explanation and buildup of the yoga scene didn't seem like anything special, then suddenly *SEXY TIMES* that are completely 'normal', lol. Great style you have, eager to read more.
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We kinda share a brain on this one, one of my favourite hypno 'genre' conventions is that weird middle ground between unaware and normalisation.
always nice when somebody gets you <3
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I actually did a double-take when the instructor got a little frisky, like 'wait did I skip a scene'? Then I realized what was happening. Only issue I can think of for the future is an actual plot of how & why this evil group came together. Your villains need a proper backstory to keep everything believable.
I'm curious as to who is next.
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Without wishing to spoil, It's likely to be someone I suspect you might be a fan of :)
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Ah
I hope this story have a good end🙂
And a BAD END😈
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I shall see what I can do ;)
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Legit astonished how fun and well constructed this is - fantastic job yet again!!!
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*Spends hours writing smut* - no reaction
*Reads this one comment* - blushing and embarrassed for the rest of the day
Will the next chapter Bimbofication tell about Applejack getting hypnotized
cause I think that would be sweet.
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The NEXT chapter won't, but when it does happen (probably a couple down the road) I'll be leaving a lot of room for people to suggest what I do with her
First does the next chapter Bimbofication include more of Miss Aura treating Pinkie Pie
like a dog (and can we see more of that 😊), and second is there a happy ending in this fic if so I hope it’s a good one?
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Doggie Pie will return! (eventually, soonish), I cannot speak to how it will end but will do my best to make it satisfying
Does the next chapter involve anything to do with Applejack
sneaking in that building to find out what Rarity 
was doing down there and is Rarity the one getting Bimboficated on or someone else?
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Bwahhhhh! You'll get no more spoilers from me fiendish commenter! (not that I don't love the interest <3). Just going to have to wait for the next chapter to come out in... hopefully a week or two.
Is it coming out this Sunday?