Ponyville is a tourist hot spot! People from all over Equestria are flocking to Ponyville, and some of the towns residents seem to be reacting strangely. Could this have something to do with a new shady business opening on the outskirts of town?
I hope that AJ is able to free Rarity and that Dash and Flutters are able to get free too, I wonder what DISCORD would say if he were to find out what was happening to them.
Gotta say, my absolute favorite part of this how you portray otherwise ordinary interactions that suddenly but casually shift to sexy/evil. The entire explanation and buildup of the yoga scene didn't seem like anything special, then suddenly *SEXY TIMES* that are completely 'normal', lol. Great style you have, eager to read more.
9742787 We kinda share a brain on this one, one of my favourite hypno 'genre' conventions is that weird middle ground between unaware and normalisation.
9742862 I actually did a double-take when the instructor got a little frisky, like 'wait did I skip a scene'? Then I realized what was happening. Only issue I can think of for the future is an actual plot of how & why this evil group came together. Your villains need a proper backstory to keep everything believable.
9818370 The NEXT chapter won't, but when it does happen (probably a couple down the road) I'll be leaving a lot of room for people to suggest what I do with her
First does the next chapter Bimbofication include more of Miss Aura treating Pinkie Pie like a dog (and can we see more of that 😊), and second is there a happy ending in this fic if so I hope it’s a good one?
Does the next chapter involve anything to do with Applejack sneaking in that building to find out what Rarity was doing down there and is Rarity the one getting Bimboficated on or someone else?
9826664 Bwahhhhh! You'll get no more spoilers from me fiendish commenter! (not that I don't love the interest <3). Just going to have to wait for the next chapter to come out in... hopefully a week or two.
9829776 Ehhhhhhhhhh, the due dates I set are becoming more and more aspirational rather than concrete, I use them for motivation a lot, and I try to hit them but miss pretty regularly. Based on current progress I'd say smart money would be on next Sunday rather than the coming one, but I'm gonna try my best :/
Hey AcidPanic before you go any further I just wanted to say I’m sorry, I understand now why it take you and other writers so long to make a story and it’s even more difficult when you’re trying to come up with the next storyline (believe me I know now I tried to make a story myself and it was tiring). So take all the time you want to make the story how you want it to be and I won’t complain about your long delay, delays are normal for writers it may take two months or maybe four but such is the life of a writer.
9875734 Don’t worry about it, like I said it means a lot that people actually care enough to look forward to the crap I write, I hate letting people down, but I’ve taken on a bit more than I can handle so just trying to get things sorted.
I hope your story turns out well! Wish I could offer advice but I don’t really know what i'm doing either so🤷
I hope that AJ is able to free Rarity and that Dash and Flutters are able to get free too, I wonder what DISCORD would say if he were to find out what was happening to them.
This is surprisingly fun. Good shit.
Whoever you go with next might I recommend a bit of BDSM?
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Unlikely to be the NEXT one but I could certainly see myself following up on this recommendation in the near-ish future!
Gotta say, my absolute favorite part of this how you portray otherwise ordinary interactions that suddenly but casually shift to sexy/evil. The entire explanation and buildup of the yoga scene didn't seem like anything special, then suddenly *SEXY TIMES* that are completely 'normal', lol. Great style you have, eager to read more.
9742787
We kinda share a brain on this one, one of my favourite hypno 'genre' conventions is that weird middle ground between unaware and normalisation.
always nice when somebody gets you <3
9742862
I actually did a double-take when the instructor got a little frisky, like 'wait did I skip a scene'? Then I realized what was happening. Only issue I can think of for the future is an actual plot of how & why this evil group came together. Your villains need a proper backstory to keep everything believable.
I'm curious as to who is next.
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Without wishing to spoil, It's likely to be someone I suspect you might be a fan of :)
9767315
Ah
I hope this story have a good end🙂
And a BAD END😈
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I shall see what I can do ;)
9777584
Legit astonished how fun and well constructed this is - fantastic job yet again!!!
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*Spends hours writing smut* - no reaction
*Reads this one comment* - blushing and embarrassed for the rest of the day
Will the next chapter Bimbofication tell about Applejack getting hypnotized cause I think that would be sweet.
9818370
The NEXT chapter won't, but when it does happen (probably a couple down the road) I'll be leaving a lot of room for people to suggest what I do with her
First does the next chapter Bimbofication include more of Miss Aura treating Pinkie Pie like a dog (and can we see more of that 😊), and second is there a happy ending in this fic if so I hope it’s a good one?
9822471
Doggie Pie will return! (eventually, soonish), I cannot speak to how it will end but will do my best to make it satisfying
Does the next chapter involve anything to do with Applejack sneaking in that building to find out what Rarity was doing down there and is Rarity the one getting Bimboficated on or someone else?
9826664
Bwahhhhh! You'll get no more spoilers from me fiendish commenter! (not that I don't love the interest <3). Just going to have to wait for the next chapter to come out in... hopefully a week or two.
Is it coming out this Sunday?
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Ehhhhhhhhhh, the due dates I set are becoming more and more aspirational rather than concrete, I use them for motivation a lot, and I try to hit them but miss pretty regularly. Based on current progress I'd say smart money would be on next Sunday rather than the coming one, but I'm gonna try my best :/
Okay take your time it’s no rush really
I mean 80% done that’s great can’t wait to read it when it’s posted
Hope the next one has something to do with Rarity dancing again anyway can’t wait to read it
So is it coming out today or what
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No, I'm really sorry, soonish promise
Like some time this Wednesday?
No wait sorry I meant sometime this Sunday or what?
9851310
I'm gonna hold off a date until I'm certain this time, it'll be done as soon as I can finish, sorry for the delay
It’s okay sorry for rushing you I hope you can understand I’m just really interested in your story and I want to see how the rest of it goes
Hey AcidPanic before you go any further I just wanted to say I’m sorry, I understand now why it take you and other writers so long to make a story and it’s even more difficult when you’re trying to come up with the next storyline (believe me I know now I tried to make a story myself and it was tiring).
So take all the time you want to make the story how you want it to be and I won’t complain about your long delay, delays are normal for writers it may take two months or maybe four but such is the life of a writer.
9875734
Don’t worry about it, like I said it means a lot that people actually care enough to look forward to the crap I write, I hate letting people down, but I’ve taken on a bit more than I can handle so just trying to get things sorted.
I hope your story turns out well! Wish I could offer advice but I don’t really know what i'm doing either so🤷
The wait is killing me. Don't want to rush but just excited.
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I am VERY optimistic that it'll be done for this coming Sunday at latest. Thanks for sticking with me <3
Hurray I can’t wait
So what time will it be posted?