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I have heard there are troubles of more than one kind. Some from ahead and some from behind.But I've bought a big bat, I'm all ready you see. Now my troubles will have troubles with me. - Dr. Seus
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So... What's the fetish(es)?
9541749
Still evolving, its only the first chapter after all Nova. As they come up, I will add them in the description
I like the "human helps main 5 solve murder mystery" idea. But if it gets too debauched i might pull out. For now I'll follow and see where this goes.
Rarity, AJ, and Dash are very much not affected by Pinkies brutal death since they seem keen on getting in Spikes pants. . . . . . .does not connect at all
9542421
They are, just a bit of levity on their part. Coping mechanism, doing something normal to restore a bit of normalcy.
9542416
The fetish tag is mostly their for the murderer, but we'll get into that later.
So far not bad, the only thing I honestly disliked is Spike being the Gary Stu of all the Gary's, like seriously couldn't you throw a few more degrees maybe master's in quantum physics and a 16inch cock to match.
Statement: I wonder what this shall evolve into.
9542698
Actually an individual lime him, with his background would have all of those things. I stuck to the practical and what he would have learned on the job. And what he needs to do his job. Theoretical Physics are not a part of that. Jfyi, his cock is not 16in, its only 6 - 8. He just has 2, a low reset time, is considerate and can go about 5 times before exhaustion.
9542715
I do as well.
9543042
While his background could fit the bill his ability to learn and master to some degree all of those doesn't, unless he's like 50y old or has an IQ of over 300 with perfect photographic memory.
Again a Gary Stu character with op knowledge or ability.
Assuming he's at most in his mind twenties he would have to study several subjects at the same time leaving no room for personal life or chores.
I dunno to me this is far to far-fetched, I wouldn't question if Spike dabbed and had some knowledge of these subjects but to master all of them and get a doctorates in all of them, while being a duke and running multiple businesses?
Honestly with this it wouldn't surprise me if Twilight had master's in all of science and history and knowledge of pony kind and beyond.
Also the 666 on the eye, isn't it a bit weird to throw it in, maybe a dead giveaway? Unless you make up some kind of Equestrian meaning to it this is purely a Christian reference something that only a human would know, or someone who knows a lot about humans and their religions.
My own guess is that this is a suicide, how would she do this you ask? simple shes Pinkie with abilities similar that Discord and cosmic knowledge of the multi verse and fourth wall, probably some of that cosmic knowledge drove her to insanity and suicide.
9543078
And yet can still be skeeved out by three old friends of his mother's. He is still the lovable guy we all know and love. My point isn't anything other than that by being Twi's assistant, he is required to be a bit Stuish. Because Twight is a bit Sueish. But it isn't the abilities, its how effective you are. I set this up to set something else up.
9543122
Why do you think Twilight and Celestia were confused by the 666? Not suicide, but you're closer than you think. But please no spoilers from the audience please. Let me have a bit of fun here.
9543078
Not running, helping to run\representing\doing the paperwork. He does this on the show repeatedly. Just as he got older he continued to do more. I am at least figuring that he is at least as intelligent as Twilight.
9543250
It's not a spoiler if I don't know the ending, you're the only one that can spoil it, I like many others can only speculate, and if you mean the 666 you've put it at the very beginning so not much of a spoiler.
9543245
It doesn't matter how effective you are if you have the IQ of a goldfish, even if Spike would've gain some study habits from Twilight and maybe learned a thing or two from her friends it's not possible for him to gain several doctorates, run multiple businesses act as a duke without a genius levels of intelligence and that's not something that one can gain or train you have to be born a genius.
If Spike was like 50y or older than it's doable as there was plenty of time.
In short you just over did Spike academics, with someone this smart why bother with the detectives or the human?
9543257
Does that mean that Elon Musk secretary is as smart as Elon Musk?
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If he raised her from birth, educated her himself, groomed her intelligence from a young age, then yes I say she would be. Actually, even in real life she would have to be nearly that because she would be responsible for al the research, leg work, keeping track of all the info, managing him and anything else he told her to do. Secretaries and assistants often do more work than the perrson they work for. Her professional resume would at least look as good as Spikes if not more so.
I'm going to have to agree with foxsevent. You did go over bored with Spikes academics and he is coming off as Gary Stu'ish and I usually don't like Gary Stus unless its for comedy sake.
9544258
Its to prove a point. He's already made a rather serious error that will bite them all, later. Having ability does not make one a Gary Stu. Its the act of things having no consequences within the greater story. Spike's actions are going to have serious consequences. He acted as he should off according to any other matter, but not this one. I wonder, can you spot how he screwed up?
9544285
I think I do but I'll wait for you to put out more. I'm interested in where you'll take this and now you have my full attention since you've said that Spike will be facing real consequences.
9544303
More his actions cause negative consequences for others.
9544328
was the reason
A. letting the benefactor remain anonymous
B. threatening the town with the lawsuit
or
C. somewhat harming the police?
because i think the answer is B, if not then A
9545934
I can in no way reply to that without giving away the plot. So read and find out.
9546321
che, dang
9546321
oh well i tried
Quite satisfying
But it could use more rhyming to match with the timing.
9576942
I will definitely keep that in mind. Thanks for the comment.
Heh, everyone's a critic.
How dark will this story get? If it gets Dairies of a Madman dark, I'm not reading this.
9578091
I have not determined that Nova. However if I come to the point where it gets truly awful I will post my author note at the top and notify my readers of what to expect. But I am probably not going to go much darker than anything else I have ever wrote. I seem to be a holding pattern on that. There will probably be so sex between trixie and anon, other than that this is mainly about solving a murder mystery with some supernatural overtones.
They're done, or they are done.
9598056
Fixed it, thanks!
I swear if spike ain't killed off before the 3rd chapter ends this story is a pile a shit.
10403498
he is not. So I geuss my story is a pile of shit. But you weren't paying attention. Spike's inexpeirence cost his friends something. Bet you can't figure out what it is.
10403541
And bet I won't considering I'll not return to this Gary Stu shitstain.
10404026
Okay, have a good day. I hope you get that fixation problem of yours looked into. BTW, Spike is not and was never going to be a main character. In fact he failed. Totally fucked up. Was going to be read the riot act once the MC showed up. Besides, the degrees you have a problem with don't make him a Gary Stu. I personally know a woman in her 30's that has Three PHDs. Please look up your definitions. Overly Sarcastic Productions did a good video on this. Perhaps you should watch it.
This is cool
I can
I ship it, cuppa tea for you my good human.
10440050
glad you like it. I have no idea when Im coming back to it. But I am glad you like it.
10756610
Anon and Trixie are quite the pair, aren't they?
Never mind. 🤢🤢🤢
Over 4 years later and no update...guess it's safe to say that this story is dead like Pinkie Pie