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Drakuse the Idiot King
Because idiots need a king.
Drakuse the Idiot King
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Well only two complains. One back Robber, should eb Bank Robber, and Two why are the Rainbooms so out of character. Dash yes the others no, them trying to attack sunset.
All will be revealed in time and I will deal with the typo after chapter 2 is up and done.
So... I suggest you re read this cause there are a bunch of simple errors that I'm sure u will notice and are easy to fix. Most of them are just missing letters or words. Other then that this is ok so far. The characters are a little ooc (not Dash) but, not to much so I guess. Except Shy.
I will be sure to do that and there is a reason behind everyone acting ooc that will make itself known soon enough.
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I will be sure to remember that
I'm beyond blood confused to WHAT THE HECK IS GOING ON HERE!
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The best way I can explain what's going on is multiple points of view and multiple different perspectives crammed into one chapter to sort of explain everything, keep in mind this story is not supposed to make much sense anyway.
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What the heck does this have to do with Anon A Miss, is still the cmc, or is it Aliens from the Planet PPFFFTTT, or is it cyborg ninjas?
I'm sorry but I no idea, or what the heck, I thought i udnerstood the story be maybe a romance one the new guy reveals she innocent but now.... i'm not sure i want to continue reading now.
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Aliens? No. Cyborg ninjas? Also no. Something different. Very interesting guesses though I have something different planned though.
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I was being sarcastic...........
You had to put that ASDF reference
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There will be more
The story premise is not bad, but some of your grammar and spelling are off. Also, you need to stop using run-on sentences. Otherwise, keep up the good work.
Damn, was hoping to see more of this it was good read so far.