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I hope you enjoy my blend of stories with a dash of innovation to spice things up.

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Ever since he grew his wings, Spike's nights have been plagued with night terror after night terror, each one getting progressively worse without any end in sight. Every night he is awoken and screams till he can scream no more. After burning both ends on the wrong candle, Twilight reaches out to Ember in hopes that she would come with a solution to the problem. Luckily for them, she does. Although it's a lot more unorthodox than any of them could initially imagine.

First off, yes, this is a vore story and it's that long-awaited request Supernova requested me for. After months of having no idea of how to write it, I finally was able to find a style of writing and stuck to it to the very end. This story is slightly inspired by Shane Koyczan's spoken word poem, "Turn On A Light". Definitely listen to it when you get the chance.

I rated this teen and didn't add the porn tag because it doesn't really have any sexual content in it. If that's a problem, I'll make any necessary changes.

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Comments ( 10 )

Wow. That truely was wild.

I did not expect this.

It wasnt bad at all but the first part was a little confusing. I'd recommend sticking to third or second person or make sure you establish who it is that's in first person. I thought it was twilight in the beginning for the first half

loved it!

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Sorry for the late reply, but how exactly? You can't just say needs polish and leave it at that.

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Also, by the like/dislike ratio, it looks like 13 other people disagree with you.

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Thats funny, cause I gave this story a like. I guess I fail math.

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Oh, that's cool, just wondering why you said it needs to be polished. That would be nice to know what I did right and what I did wrong so I can look out for that. It wasn't supposed to be a personal attack or anything. Sorry if it came off that way.

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