• Published 22nd Mar 2019
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Coup d'étarte - Withania



Chrysalis carries out her most devious plan to conquer Equestria yet - by devouring and then impersonating Celestia. CW: Vore

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Comments ( 8 )

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I don't always get around to doing alt. endings... but... Well here's an alternate outcome!

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An ok turnaround with some flavors of Karma. Somewhat surprised you went with hips and not with buttocks and/or buttcheeks. But hey, you're the writer in this one.

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Hawt.

Tho, I still think changelings would keep the pony in themselves like a battery in a flashlight. Why fumble with a clumsy pod you have hide somewhere and then visit for a snack when you can carry your meal with you for a continuous nibble. And if worse comes to worse, ponies are much less likely to throw spears or blast you if that battery in your belly might get seriously hurt by their actions... hostage is such an ugly word.

I enjoyed this story a lot. ^w^ the first ending though, not the alt. >=3

Honestly... I like the idea that Daybreaker is somewhere inside Celestia's subconscious. Makes me want to write a fic from Tia's point of view with her having those "niggling little dark thoughts" in the back of her head and having like... mental conversations or something, and seeing her in her dreams, with Daybreaker.

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I can think of two right off...
An Intimate Relationship (Chrysalis and Twilight)
Given Shape (OC goo-changeling and Twilight)

(I believe it's against TOS to actually link stories here in the comments, or maybe it's just bad form to do so? Not sure)

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