Bon Bon and Lyra play sweet music.
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NO
SS&E, I love your writing, but one day is too much, too much I say
I'm not sure if I should be sad or confused.
Edit: Wtf is going on in hur
will it ever end!
Already read the beta, was creepy as fuck.
Yes
EDIT: Wow, that was powerful. I'm not gonna lie, through all the confusion that comes with dreaming, I really felt the underlying helplessness of it all. This is definitely my favorite of your one-offs.
... Un Follow.
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I read the first line out of curiosity and I think I'm going to love it
Dear God almighty, how many of these do you have?! Slow down!
*Do not read this*
One particular quirk of my personality is that no matter what, if I see a story that I'm even remotely interested in, I can hardly resist reading it- and completing it with all possible speed without missing any details. It feels like some sort of hunger for fiction that can not be sated. And thus, I shall read this... When I get through all the rest of what seems to be the results of the coming of the L-Day that I haven't heard much about (although this is probably my own fault)
when my holiday ended and my college class start next monday 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what the fuck
Also about all these stories in such a short time?
1196059 1196085>>1196079Description says DON'T read this.
what the hell is this?!?! my mind is full of fuck right now.
I'm not the only one who doesn't want people to read their fics!
What IS THIS?
Is it just me, but
SPOILER:
Was this all Lyra's coma?
What were you SMOKING when you wrote this?
This was truly one of my favorites from the last writeoff, and I was saddened it didn't do better. So glad I caught it here on the front page! :D
bgewrkbg;ae.ksbglsergg,arl,erg,aegag WHAT THE FUCK!
Brilliant!
Woooooooooooooooah...
-Minty
That was both repetitive and lacked a needed sad/tragedy tag. Otherwise well composed.
I... um... woah.... you sure this shouldn't have the "dark" tag instead of the "random" one? I... wow. Normally, I can make a pretty fair-sized comment about things I read but... damn, this made me speechless. And in a good way... I think?
1196095 1196232 Seconded.
^ ^ ^ ^ ^
Play this while you read. All my feels.
I have the weirdest boner right now.
....
I...
But....
What...
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I don't know what just happened... but I think I get it? Maybe?
My head hurts, this was really good, kind of out there, is meta the right word? The only thing is you lost me for a while at the point Bonbon cuts off Lyra's head and wears it like a helmet, I know she is kind of being tortured in tartarus or something but I don't know, how can you go back and see your lovers face and hug them with the knowledge that minutes before you did that to said face... even if I don't know, the Bonbons and lyras were kind of mixed up at the end and confusion and discord and what and..... DAMN IT ALL my brain hurts...
I don't know what you were on while writing this, but I want some.
... As i read this I kept coming up with 'one does not simply' jokes...
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javascript:smilie('
');My mind just got fucked. Mind fucked for surejavascript:smilie('
');. Why was TRagedy not one of the tags? or sad? Geez, this shit is gonna give me nightmares... I still love it though
Your biggest fan, AppleJack
Ow. Ow ow ow, My brain! OW! Too confusing!
I like it, I'm a small bit confused but I loved it!
Incredible. Brilliant. And soooo sad. Dammit, SS&E. And now my head's all tripped out and the world feels weird just from having followed all of that to the last twist and BAD END
Out of all them stories, THIS one liked and faved. And to think I thought maybe it was some prank on that manga Bobobo-bo Bo-bobo?
And this deserves a TRAGEDY tag- though if you feel it gives the game away, all right. But 'random' is misleading.
The only thing I can say for certain is that you have an excellent command of dream imagery, no matter how regrettably based in internally-consistent real-world-like logic the dream world you have described seems to be. I particularly liked the part where the oak trees were grinding together at the center of the cube. Otherwise this was entirely confusing and mismatched.
It isn't a dream.
from the agony of your last failing struggle to reach the reality of your beloved...
It's an ending.
RIP Lyra Heartstrings
My mind is tickled in the strangest way.
And this needs a sad/tragedy tag, even if it takes some of the twist away.
Your art is beautiful, but it reminds me that the world is ugly.
Wow, dude, you just blew my mind away. My mind is probably in Serbia by now, you blew it so hard. This was sad, though. Really, really sad. It's also a mind-buck, but still sad. It made me confused, and I had no freaking idea what was happening until the end, but then you confused us more and threw in a big ol'
.
So to summarize, well-done.
Confuzzledly,
~Plyxe
Wow...That was sadder than Background Pony...I'm gonna curl up and think about things for a little while.
jesus what
I done read a thing. The thing done broke my brain.
Brain initiating manual reboot...
...
...
Ahem. So, in summary, brilliant stuff as usual dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Twilight_crazy.png
Did you have this song in mind when writing this perchance?
Behold...PON PON PON!
Read this in the Write-Off. It was mindscrewing and heartrending, in that order.
"You can be happy! You can make sweet music!"
What did I just clop to?
I like to imagine you just woke up one day with a chunk of your skull missing and all these stories conveniently written for you. Seriously, I have no idea what dark Eldridge abomination you make sacrifices to, but it seems to be paying off.
1203086 when i saw this, I scrolled down so hard my scroll bar broke out of my screen
Soooooo... Lyra dies?
I cannot make up my mind as to whether this is brilliant or redundant.
Thumbs up anyway
I don't even... What? I'm going to have to read this like a dozen times when it's not 4am, I think. Maybe then I'll get it all. For now all I think I know is that poor Lyra died and you're a very special, wonderful kind of crazy.
I don't swear often, but
WHAT.
THE.
HELL.