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Bon Bon and Lyra play sweet music.

Do not read this.

First Published
1st Sep 2012
Last Modified
1st Sep 2012
#1 · 133w, 6d ago · · ·

NO

SS&E, I love your writing, but one day is too much, too much I say

#2 · 133w, 6d ago · 4 · ·

I'm not sure if I should be sad or confused.

Edit: Wtf is going on in hur

#3 · 133w, 6d ago · · ·

will it ever end!

#4 · 133w, 6d ago · · ·

Already read the beta, was creepy as fuck.

#5 · 133w, 6d ago · 1 · ·

Yes

EDIT: Wow, that was powerful. I'm not gonna lie, through all the confusion that comes with dreaming, I really felt the underlying helplessness of it all. This is definitely my favorite of your one-offs.

#6 · 133w, 6d ago · · 9 ·

... Un Follow.

#8 · 133w, 6d ago · · ·

I read the first line out of curiosity and I think I'm going to love it

#9 · 133w, 6d ago · · ·

Dear God almighty, how many of these do you have?! Slow down!

#10 · 133w, 6d ago · · ·

*Do not read this*

One particular quirk of my personality is that no matter what, if I see a story that I'm even remotely interested in, I can hardly resist reading it- and completing it with all possible speed without missing any details. It feels like some sort of hunger for fiction that can not be sated. And thus, I shall read this... When I get through all the rest of what seems to be the results of the coming of the L-Day that I haven't heard much about (although this is probably my own fault)

#11 · 133w, 6d ago · 1 · ·

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#12 · 133w, 6d ago · · ·

what the fuck

#13 · 133w, 6d ago · · ·

Also about all these stories in such a short time?

#14 · 133w, 6d ago · · ·

>>1196059 >>1196085>>1196079Description says DON'T read this.

#15 · 133w, 6d ago · 1 · ·

what the hell is this?!?! my mind is full of fuck right now.:derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2::derpytongue2:

#16 · 133w, 6d ago · · ·

I'm not the only one who doesn't want people to read their fics! :pinkiecrazy:

#17 · 133w, 6d ago · 8 · ·

What IS THIS?

Is it just me, but

SPOILER:

Was this all Lyra's coma? :rainbowhuh:


What were you SMOKING when you wrote this?

PresentPerfect
Author Interviewer
#18 · 133w, 6d ago · · ·

This was truly one of my favorites from the last writeoff, and I was saddened it didn't do better. So glad I caught it here on the front page! :D

#19 · 133w, 6d ago · 1 · ·

bgewrkbg;ae.ksbglsergg,arl,erg,aegag WHAT THE FUCK!

#20 · 133w, 6d ago · · ·

Brilliant!:rainbowkiss:

#21 · 133w, 6d ago · · ·

Woooooooooooooooah...

-Minty

#22 · 133w, 6d ago · · ·

That was both repetitive and lacked a needed sad/tragedy tag. Otherwise well composed.

#23 · 133w, 6d ago · · ·

I... um... woah.... you sure this shouldn't have the "dark" tag instead of the "random" one? I... wow. Normally, I can make a pretty fair-sized comment about things I read but... damn, this made me speechless. And in a good way... I think?

#25 · 133w, 6d ago · · ·

^    ^    ^    ^    ^

Play this while you read. All my feels.

#26 · 133w, 6d ago · · ·

I have the weirdest boner right now.

#27 · 133w, 6d ago · · ·

....

I...

But....

What...

#28 · 133w, 6d ago · 3 · ·

I don't know what just happened... but I think I get it? Maybe?

#29 · 133w, 6d ago · 4 · ·

My head hurts, this was really good, kind of out there, is meta the right word? The only thing is you lost me for a while at the point Bonbon cuts off Lyra's head and wears it like a helmet, I know she is kind of being tortured in tartarus or something but I don't know, how can you go back and see your lovers face and hug them with the knowledge that minutes before you did that to said face... even if I don't know, the Bonbons and lyras were kind of mixed up at the end and confusion and discord and what and..... DAMN IT ALL my brain hurts...

#30 · 133w, 6d ago · 2 · ·

:rainbowhuh:

I don't know what you were on while writing this, but I want some.

#31 · 133w, 6d ago · · ·

... As i read this I kept coming up with 'one does not simply' jokes...

#32 · 133w, 6d ago · · ·

javascript:smilie(':facehoof:');My mind just got fucked. Mind fucked for surejavascript:smilie(':derpyderp1:');. Why was TRagedy not one of the tags? or sad? Geez, this shit is gonna give me nightmares... I still love it though

Your biggest fan, AppleJack

#33 · 133w, 6d ago · · ·

Ow. Ow ow ow, My brain! OW! Too confusing!

#34 · 133w, 6d ago · · ·

I like it, I'm a small bit confused but I loved it! :pinkiehappy:

#35 · 133w, 6d ago · · ·

:applejackconfused:

Incredible. Brilliant. And soooo sad. Dammit, SS&E. And now my head's all tripped out and the world feels weird just from having followed all of that to the last twist and BAD END :raritydespair:

Out of all them stories, THIS one liked and faved. And to think I thought maybe it was some prank on that manga Bobobo-bo Bo-bobo?

And this deserves a TRAGEDY tag- though if you feel it gives the game away, all right. But 'random' is misleading.

#36 · 133w, 6d ago · · ·

The only thing I can say for certain is that you have an excellent command of dream imagery, no matter how regrettably based in internally-consistent real-world-like logic the dream world you have described seems to be. I particularly liked the part where the oak trees were grinding together at the center of the cube. Otherwise this was entirely confusing and mismatched.

#37 · 133w, 6d ago · 2 · ·

It isn't a dream.

It's an ending. :applejackconfused:

RIP Lyra Heartstrings :ajsleepy: from the agony of your last failing struggle to reach the reality of your beloved...

:raritycry:

#38 · 133w, 6d ago · · ·

My mind is tickled in the strangest way.

And this needs a sad/tragedy tag, even if it takes some of the twist away.

#39 · 133w, 5d ago · · ·

How odd. How very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very odd.

I_S
#40 · 133w, 5d ago · 3 · ·

:pinkiesad2:

Your art is beautiful, but it reminds me that the world is ugly.

#41 · 133w, 5d ago · 2 · ·

Wow, dude, you just blew my mind away.  My mind is probably in Serbia by now, you blew it so hard.  This was sad, though.  Really, really sad.  It's also a mind-buck, but still sad.  It made me confused, and I had no freaking idea what was happening until the end, but then you confused us more and threw in a big ol' :twistnerd:.

So to summarize, well-done.

   Confuzzledly,

                  ~Plyxe

#42 · 133w, 5d ago · · ·

Wow...That was sadder than Background Pony...I'm gonna curl up and think about things for a little while.

#43 · 133w, 5d ago · · ·

jesus what

#44 · 133w, 5d ago · 1 · ·

I done read a thing. The thing done broke my brain.

Brain initiating manual reboot...

...

...

Ahem. So, in summary, brilliant stuff as usual

#45 · 133w, 5d ago · · ·

Did you have this song in mind when writing this perchance?

Behold...PON PON PON!

Ezn
#46 · 133w, 5d ago · 2 · ·

Read this in the Write-Off. It was mindscrewing and heartrending, in that order.

"You can be happy! You can make sweet music!"

#47 · 133w, 4d ago · 1 · ·

What did I just clop to?

I like to imagine you just woke up one day with a chunk of your skull missing and all these stories conveniently written for you.  Seriously, I have no idea what dark Eldridge abomination you make sacrifices to, but it seems to be paying off. :rainbowderp:

#48 · 133w, 2d ago · 2 · ·

>>1203086 when i saw this, I scrolled down so hard my scroll bar broke out of my screen

#49 · 133w, 2d ago · 2 · ·

Soooooo... Lyra dies?

I cannot make up my mind as to whether this is brilliant or redundant.

Thumbs up anyway :pinkiehappy:

#50 · 133w, 1d ago · · ·

I don't even... What? I'm going to have to read this like a dozen times when it's not 4am, I think. Maybe then I'll get it all. For now all I think I know is that poor Lyra died and you're a very special, wonderful kind of crazy.

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