Some bruiser is making Pinkie Pie think she’s in trouble all the time. He gets angry, pushes her around, and physically and mentally hurts her. And, he’s making her think that her father and sister, Limestone, wants to do it. Pinkie gets help from an unlikely source.
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Thanks for the heads up. I just fixed it. I hope you like the cover art too.
Oh hoho. If this little st was doing any of this to me or my friends he would gladly take that six months of community Service.
To quote Dwane Johnson from a popular movie:
"They're here to protect you, from me killing your a
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Two words in one phrase,"cluster*ck"
I'm sorry to ask...but what planet are you from?!!
Most of this doesn't make sense. How he gets away with it, while committing such acts in front of EVERYONE!
Teachers, students the principal and vice principal.
In front of her family getting into her father's car and assaulting her.
Yet nobody does anything, only after he appears on the news?
After finally arrested and six months of community service...he would been expelled, be serving maybe several months to years of real jail time for several cases of assault and battery, harassment.
Sorry, but this is just...bad. I mean with some work it can be good, but as it is...it's just feels rushed. I get this is a one-shot story, but you should at least try to make it suitable for people to read it and not have it be a cluster fuck.