Discord's back to haunt Twilight for imprisoning him a second time. Has he found a new way to escape? Some unexpected allies come in to stop the draconequus forever, but are Twilight Sparkle and the others willing to pay such a price?
Discord's back to haunt Twilight for imprisoning him a second time. Has he found a new way to escape? Some unexpected allies come in to stop the draconequus forever, but are Twilight Sparkle and the others willing to pay such a price?
A lovely story!
I admire the detail that you put into your writing; you know the characters extremely well. Your writing is fluid.
My only complaint is that everything after Celestia puts Twilight back to sleep feels tacked on; I would have stopped the story sooner.
Keep on writing!
oooooohhhhh yeeeesssssss this is a fic i will follow...good work my friend!
AC reference...
All I can say is that is was shorter than I expected it to be, but it was perfect.
Great job.
Excellent writing. Very fluid, dynamic, etc.
Characters are well written, and Discord is just chilling here.
Loved the interaction between Twilight and Celestia. Very heart-warming.
Very well done.
Excellent writing combined with a brilliant portrayal of the philosophy of morals and an ending that is so warming, it's causing heartburn.
I'm serious, this is just a perfect story.
Discord did not die! I am soooo happy! the story did scare me a bit though I thought it was nice in general.