Nothing in known for what happens to a soul after death. Some believe in a god that will bring them to heaven while some believe that they’ll be reborn. For one person who died due to the mistake of a god, got a second chance in the land of Equestria
I really like the story, I do suggest you have someone who can proofread and edit for you though. There are some grammatical errors that can be easily fixed with a once-over. I also suggest to try and be aware of your use for certain words or phrases as you seem to use them consistently. Aside from that, great story thus far! Cant wait for more!
You mentioned that the element bearers had hard to get into graves in the story. Is the main character going to travel to them to obtain certain abilities or weapons like in the game? That just my prediction.
I really like the story, I do suggest you have someone who can proofread and edit for you though. There are some grammatical errors that can be easily fixed with a once-over. I also suggest to try and be aware of your use for certain words or phrases as you seem to use them consistently. Aside from that, great story thus far! Cant wait for more!
You mentioned that the element bearers had hard to get into graves in the story. Is the main character going to travel to them to obtain certain abilities or weapons like in the game? That just my prediction.