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The fanfic has barely started and there's already so much going on. I can't wait what the next chapter will bring us!
So far so good. Don't leave us hanging and I expect you to follow through on the [sex] tag.
I see the rating and the tags and I have no idea where this story will go.
Why isn't there an OC tag?
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because OC is not the main character of this fanfic
A nice, action-packed start! Can't want to see where it goes.
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Don't worry, she will. But just don't expect this to be a clopfic. It's an adventure story with some clop elements.
“Care for some cookie?” Either “a cookie,” or “some cookies,” I think.
Good start. Ho, boy. Twilight, you got some 'splaining to do!
Who would you have as Voice Actors for Hearth and Everlight?
I'd have Jeff Bennet and Robin Atkin Downes respectively.
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I don't really know a lot of actors by name.
But I would say that Hearth have Theoden's voice while Everlight - Saruman's. Those are LOTR characters.
Finally getting around to reading this, let's hope this will be good.
Definitely feels like a male Celestia, but there does appear to be something about him that makes him feel just different enough to feel like his own character...
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I hope you would like the story. If you have any criticism, I'd be happy to hear it.
And if you finish all that I've written already, I should warn you that I won't be uploading new chapters for a few months. I'm still working on the story, it's just easier to fix any arising issues if the chapter haven't been uploaded yet. I'll continue updates after I've written a fair bit ahead.
Heh, it's kinda funny: me finding this story. You and I seem to have had similar ideas for a new twist on modern Equestrian politics and whatnot. Although, I'd say that my version is a bit more radical due to a few more extensive changes to the ancient histories.
Anyway, this is an interesting opening to the story. I'm curious to what happens next. Good start!