You have both this story and "Spike and the the Lustful Lamp" set as sequels to one another. Which is the sequel and which is the prequel?

9500069
It could be ether way i just set them in the same universe

You really should get an editor, or at least read back over your own story for the numerous grammatical errors. This has real potential, and it's disappointing that it's in an unreadable state due to illiteracy.

9503035
I did have an editor edit this

9503046
Let me clarify. You should get an editor who speaks English.

Serves you right Button.

9866868
yeah... my mom would murder me if i ever pulled that...