I find mean romantic interests make for a very good storyline... reminds me of a show I used to watch where the main character was always beaten mentally and insulted... but eventually they found love in their little twisted relationship. I shall be watching this... seems like it will be worth the time invested.. and I do hope you will update and continue soon.
“I’m going to keep whistling...” you groaned, remaining defiant. This time, Limestone gripped your hair and forced you to look at her angry expression.
“You are treading on very... thin... ice... buster!” she growled, but of course, you naturally met her threatening look with your trademark grin.
His back story got me their, but knowing limestone pie from the show and what cloudy pie told him, it make sense why she's next.
I wonder how long her attitude and her heart will succumb to his positive mental attitude. No really, she does need some Jacksepticeye's P.M.A., let alone a date ;)
9437388 Not only is that true but no doctor will ever kill a healthy person to save an ill one. I'm not going to lie, this was done very poorly and you are indeed correct.
I have taken to simply skipping the part at the beginning where they die.
9737063 Besides the medical ethics issues, it also reads like his sisters treated him like crap to the point he felt he had to commit suicide to gain their approval. And the mom...I'd feel sorry for her since realistically this should tear their remaining family apart when the full impact of what the sisters did sets in, and that she gets to live at the cost of her son...except she apparently LET him go through with it.
So yeah, this setup negatively colors the rest of the story.
9737486 You don't need a medical degree to see all the blatant unfortunate implications and violations of common sense the intro has. Throwing your life away for a family that treats you like dirt is sad, but not in a 'noble sacrifice' way but a 'what an idiot' way.
This is going to be interesting.
Good chapter
I find mean romantic interests make for a very good storyline... reminds me of a show I used to watch where the main character was always beaten mentally and insulted... but eventually they found love in their little twisted relationship. I shall be watching this... seems like it will be worth the time invested.. and I do hope you will update and continue soon.
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Everyone's entitled to their opinion and I respect yours
You could delete everything before that and would make no impact on the fic.
Gonna love Lime, go on
I love this!![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
this is going to be special
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It isn't an opinion. It is a fact that it would regenerate. This was an easy way to kill off the MC in the first world.
Oh, this story is gonna be good!![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
The cover looks good but I think you can do better lol
His back story got me their, but knowing limestone pie from the show and what cloudy pie told him, it make sense why she's next.
I wonder how long her attitude and her heart will succumb to his positive mental attitude. No really, she does need some Jacksepticeye's P.M.A.,
let alone a date ;)
Limestone pie is going to beat me up for it lol.
Limestone kinda reminds me of Gunnery Sergeant Hartman from Full Metal Jacket. R.I.P. Gunny.
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I still miss that hardcore son of a bitch
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Not only is that true but no doctor will ever kill a healthy person to save an ill one. I'm not going to lie, this was done very poorly and you are indeed correct.
I have taken to simply skipping the part at the beginning where they die.
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well excuse me for not having a medical degree and not knowing how hospital's work, I just work with what me and my editor comes up with
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Besides the medical ethics issues, it also reads like his sisters treated him like crap to the point he felt he had to commit suicide to gain their approval. And the mom...I'd feel sorry for her since realistically this should tear their remaining family apart when the full impact of what the sisters did sets in, and that she gets to live at the cost of her son...except she apparently LET him go through with it.
So yeah, this setup negatively colors the rest of the story.
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You don't need a medical degree to see all the blatant unfortunate implications and violations of common sense the intro has. Throwing your life away for a family that treats you like dirt is sad, but not in a 'noble sacrifice' way but a 'what an idiot' way.
This is gonna be fun.
Who knew limestone was so aggressive at least her sisters maud and marble and pinkie are easier to spend time with