Curses! I skimmed the votes on the previous chapter here on FiMfiction and started this chapter hoping to see one of my most anticipated ships take place, only to be disappointed. Oh well, I can't complain, FlutterSpike is good too. And Spike got to fight timberwolves!
I wonder what's going on in Rarity's mind right now.
I’m not lying when I say it took all five of them to stabilize him. Don't talk to your readers in the story like that.
I liked the chapter and the action scene. The damage seemed realistic, so that's good. Fluttershy was well written and having her stay there due to his injuries makes a lot of sense.
Rarity is just... agitating. Fluttershy's train of thought on that is dead on. Of course, if you're using all this like I think you are, kudos.
Dayum. Spike be gettin' all da Mares. Dawg. Applejack is not amused. I AM NOT RACIST! SORREH'.
Curses! I skimmed the votes on the previous chapter here on FiMfiction and started this chapter hoping to see one of my most anticipated ships take place, only to be disappointed. Oh well, I can't complain, FlutterSpike is good too. And Spike got to fight timberwolves!
I wonder what's going on in Rarity's mind right now.
God damn thats gotta hurt, in all honesty he should be near dead right now, but still, continue
GET ON WITH IT!
1216600 Well what's your favorite shipping?
1220148 TrixieSpike, of course!
1220539 Where can I find a TrixiexSpike?.... I've been looking all OVER!!!!!
1220643 Dealt a Bad Hoof is probably the first TrixiexSpike stories ever written, and a darn good story to boot.
And TrixieSpike is not an example of great writing, but it's still a ship between the two and has a pretty neat twist in the third chapter.
I’m not lying when I say it took all five of them to stabilize him. Don't talk to your readers in the story like that.
I liked the chapter and the action scene. The damage seemed realistic, so that's good. Fluttershy was well written and having her stay there due to his injuries makes a lot of sense.
Rarity is just... agitating. Fluttershy's train of thought on that is dead on. Of course, if you're using all this like I think you are, kudos.
Discord my man you have started an orgy.
I like where this is going.