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Angels? Demons? No, no, those equine creatures are far too colorful, not to mention none of them have chainsaws or lawnmowers. Maybe one of the locals can explain what has happened; nevermind, although it seems a party is in order. How shall the young earl return back to his manor? What manner of sorcery got him here in the first place? Where in the name of tea and scones is Sebastian?!
A Kuroshitsuji(Black Butler) and MLP crossover.
Enjoy~!

HEY! LISTEN!
I kinda need a cover pic for this, preferably featuring Pinkie Pie and Ciel. I'm sorry I have nothing to offer you in return other than credit, about 3/64 of my soul, and all my lavs. A thousand thanks to anypony who answers this call!

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 37 )

1078328
haha~ I'm workin' on it!
thanks! :pinkiehappy:

Rai

1079104 overall it was a good story and I am looking forward to other chapters.

The only thing I could really criticize is the odd spelling mistake every now and then. Just go over your chapters and correct those and you sir have a solid story

woot! I been wonderin' how long 'til somepony on this site made one! :yay:

1079593
Oh, thanks~ I usually skim over when I'm done, but I guess I missed a few ^^' I type kinda fast...
Thank you so much! Any criticism is always appreciated.
And thanks for faving, too! :rainbowkiss:

1083064
Me too ^^ Thanks! :pinkiehappy:

Oh good god. Grell under the eye of the princesses. Lol

Wait? Isn't Grell a chick?
Another note, lots of spelling mistakes

zel

1141017

Wait? Isn't Grell a chick?

:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:


Awesome as always.dl.dropbox.com/u/93510029/spike.png

1141415
You're laughing doesn't answer my question. This chapter uses 'he' when reffering to grell while in the anime Grell constantly asks sebastian if that's any way to treat a lady. :ajbemused:

zel

1147665 Because Grell has some... well... Personality problems, let us name it like that.dl.dropbox.com/u/93510029/spike.png
He is male, of course.:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

1147665
well, despite how much Grell would rather be a woman, he is male ^^' that's why I used 'he' (although I edited his one line at the end, so now he says "i'm Miss Grell" rather than just "grell", 'kay~?)
It took me and my sis forever to figure out his gender, though :derpyderp2:
oh, and thanks for reading! :D

I am honored to be a character in your story but what kind of black butler fan fiction would this be without having Grell in it. :derpytongue2:

1157342
haha of course you have to be in it! You're GRELL! *fansqueals* :rainbowkiss:
just wait til the next chapter~ :yay: I guarantee at least 20% more homosmexy Grell-ness

YEA!!!!:yay: I was searching and searching for a good crossover story, and yours is the first!!!! Oh, and of you're having a difficult time thinking of stuff to write, start thinking of something random and just let your train of thought wander....... Eventually, you end up with a great idea!!! ( it works, that's how I always get unstuck when I'm writing. Once I thought of guavas and ended up with a character in out world finding the reference guide to the elements of harmony and being transported to ponyville when they opened it.):pinkiehappy:

1162396
thanks so much! :rainbowkiss: I know, I'm always searching for good crossovers, and I'm glad I can make 'em, too. And thanks for the advice, that's kinda what I've been doing, anyways! I'll just sit down and start writing whatever pops into my head.
and lol, cool story idea. I'll have to read it~:pinkiehappy:
thanks! :D

FIRST, BIOTCHES!!! :flutterrage:
This was a very good chapter, but i thought rarity would react more differently too their high-class way of speech, and also, ciel wouldn't really accept being dragged around like a dog, and also, the people in black butler (or kuroshitsuji) are english, not japanese, might wanna give the "sama" thing with grell some thinking over, but other than tha, good chapter and story, can't wait for the next one :pinkiehappy:

1270046
haha lol first indeed~
thanks, i guess I just was having some troubles writing this one ^^' and the whole thing with ciel on a collar was a personal request from a freind....lol I tried to fit it in as best I could >_> failed a bit though....
And I know they're english, but it's anime...soo....meh idunno...
thanks for all the critiquing, though, good sir/madame~ :rainbowkiss:

1275503
I am a good sir, as it states in my name (sonicMAN501) no offense, but I like how you considered both genders, my good sir/madame

1275841
oh lol I shoulda guessed that :derpytongue2:
and, although I may not be "good", I am a bro as well

1278954
Very good, fellow bros loving kuroshitsuji and mlp, the results are just full of epicness :pinkiecrazy:

Dayum. a month since I updated. Sorry, everyone...made this one extra long in hopes of forgiveness....again, sorry....man, I gotta update more often..I actually had to go back and re-read my own story. gah, sooo sorry....:fluttershyouch:
I better end this comment now before I apologize a million more times ^^'

um this is cool

Did I read right that twilight is the new butler. :derpyderp2:

1351619
No :twilightoops: it said the one who found Ciel is the new butler :pinkiegasp: this is going to be interesting :pinkiecrazy:

1351471
thanks, bro :D
1352001
very observant, my good fellow~ and craziness will ensue :pinkiecrazy:

Wait wait wait i think you may have either gotten one of the japanese name titles wrong or just them in general because Grell suggests that he is in fact female but still refers to luna as san which would be acceptable in those circumstances had grell not been talking with luna so casually. Also that scene with rainbow dash and pinkie threw me off as well because grell referred to rainbow dash as 'kun' which is a males title, even if the female is acting boyish she would still be identified as san or chan.:twilightsmile:

Another thing is that sebastian seems really ooc, but only because you have his speech patterns placed about two centuries ahead of classical english speech patterns:eeyup:

You portrayed me very well. :twilightsmile:

Only problem I have with it is that I believe that anyone that crossed over into Equestria would be ponified... which did not happen...

CONTINUE THE STORY BRO

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awe i wish you would do more

YOU BETTER NOT TURN MY SEBBY INTO A PEDO:twilightangry2::twilightangry2:

A... a Kuroshitsuji/MLP crossover fic? :raritystarry:
"Last Modified 27th September 2012"
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Awwwwww that fuy again....
And pinkie, aliens aren't green, for pete sake.

Grell creeps me out in the series of black butler

oh my such fun

HEY! LISTEN!
I kinda need a cover pic for this, preferably featuring Pinkie Pie and Ciel. I'm sorry I have nothing to offer you in return other than credit, about 3/64 of my soul, and all my lavs. A thousand thanks to anypony who answers this call!

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