This was interesting for sure. I do like the little bonus chapter here at the end. It will be funny to see Lime around more often. Really the whole Pie family just need to move into town seeing how all the daughters are going to end up living there. The only thing that made me a bit sad is the ending in the last chapter honestly. It felt.... well rushed. Or more liked it just abruptly end s. It just felt like there should have been more, more build up to the finish, more intimacy, idk I am sure I am doing a poor job of putting it into words seeing how I haven't slept since starting Kingdom Hearts 3 lol. But I just feel that more....girth in the ending then would have made this alot more filling of a story. I really hope you keep this world going with more pairing with Spike or we even just get to see him with the girls he already have since we haven't seen him with them yet.

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The last one was more of a set up for the next fic

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I mean I get it, I don't me the whole Lime coming with the pie. I was more referring to the clop itself. I felt that ending just really sharply. I think it started great, with the slow pace and very caring and sensual tone of it all. That was very nice and showed a great side to Spike and honestly best chance therapeutic for him to be able to have a sensual encounter after dealing with those crazy Alicorn sisters lol. But than it kinda feel like the reel of the movie just gets snipped and it just comes to a jarring end.

sequel?

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In a way yes

Well shit... To her knocked up on the first time without a standing partner...

Ha! I do see that jokes run in the family!

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Multiple breasts one chapter when last chapter they only have two.
They walk on all fours one chapter, when the next they don't. Inconsistencies that would make Hasbro proud.

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None of that happens in this at all, I think you may have confuse this one with another one. I never once said anything about more then two breasts in this one and I also never said anything about them walking on four legs. I did said getting down on all fours at one point but that wasn't because they were walking

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Wait, I just of something. When you say chapter do you mean story? Because no all fanfica I have written takes place in the same series. The Royal dragon series is as follow, The Truth Of The Royal Dragons, Spike's Slice Of Lime Pie, The festival Of New Life, Spike's Bachelor Party, Spike's Wedding And Honeymood, and Rainbow Dash Gets Cuckquean. Those are at the moment the only stories I have written in the series, the others I have written are not part of this series or any series at all.

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I mean chapter. I've read the first two of the series and am working on the third. But seriously, get a proofreader.

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Then I'm very confuse about what you are talking about because I can't find a single instance of anything you have listed happening in this fic

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Previous set in the series.

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There was only one set in this series before this and it didn't have any of that either. I did have multiple breasted anthros in two other stories that aren't part of this series and one non-anthro clopfic that also wasn't part of this series. Keeping The dragon, Spike The Dragon Welcome to Gaia, and Gina Quest For The Dragon's Scepter sounds like what you are talking about but they aren't part of any series