9386555 Concept and creation are needed together for something to be palatable. You need to get a proofreader if you can’t navigate the language by yourself.
A TIP: Looks do not use the term 'monster' to say a different race of dragon, use guild term, clan or house, example: House of the Dragon Skeletons or Clan of the dragon skeletons or guild of the skeleton dragons, it makes it possible to invoke a ancestral skeleton in feral form or anthro that the characteristic of the clan or house.
Do not be lazy by names, your OC name (name of your nick is meaningless) and Spike's Name (in the Twilight story of that name) searches for the name of dragon or warrior.
And it creates jealousies for Twilight, about this new brother of Spike.
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Concept and creation are needed together for something to be palatable. You need to get a proofreader if you can’t navigate the language by yourself.
A TIP:
Looks do not use the term 'monster' to say a different race of dragon, use guild term, clan or house, example: House of the Dragon Skeletons or Clan of the dragon skeletons or guild of the skeleton dragons, it makes it possible to invoke a ancestral skeleton in feral form or anthro that the characteristic of the clan or house.
Do not be lazy by names, your OC name (name of your nick is meaningless) and Spike's Name (in the Twilight story of that name) searches for the name of dragon or warrior.
And it creates jealousies for Twilight, about this new brother of Spike.
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Thx for the tip this is just my first story