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I love this fic. Please do not abandon It as "Harmony Kingdom"
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Yeah. I have high hopes! This could be much better then the other one! Some good effort, and you'll have it!
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I did not find Harmony Kingdom a bad fic, I just wanted them to continue( Sorry the Google translator)
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I know. I did find it pretty good. It was just a little....bare. You know what I mean?
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Yes . I understand . One of the few defects of this fic (not your fiction it has a lot of potential) and that she did not take Spike along with her. Sorry for the translator, I'm Brazilian.
more? little bare for my liking i jeneraly stay away from fics with less than 1500 word chapters but ill hang round i love me some bad ass twilight
Gag
Love it keep it up please!
I wrote rise of the mostly kingdom and I am interested in reading more
Might give me motivation to continue my own story
This fic has promise and potential.
The only problem is that it's too fast paced really. Other than that, concept and writing style is good, just slow down the pace a bit
Great so far if a little short on the chapter langth
I going to bet the weddings canceled
all of this swearing; you have my interest
So from what I can gather this is an alternate timeline where Twilight left after acusing Cadance(Chryslis) of being evil and every got mad at her. So Twilight doesn't know that she was right all along and the real Cadance managed to escape on her own. Correct if I'm wrong.
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Yes
Holy This went form 0 to 100 so quickly
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Well when one tends to be heart broken, they dont really use their head to think.
Interesting story so far,
ps. there seems to be some spelling errors in Cadence shouting.
Why didn't she even yell at Shining Armor?
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Because he was brainwashed, not exactly fair to yell at him.
How I imagine luna would say everything if she knew the stupid things Celestia has done . Its perfect
Yo listen up listen up, this here was the thing that was suppose to happen in the show not "hey look we betrayed Twilight and just because we apologized she forgives us " (its completely impossible to ignore that much damage without having the biggest heart even so it'd take a long time before forgiveness is even a possibility at that point but ah well shows will be shows)
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He wasnt brain washed until the actual wedding.
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Meh, sometimes you've gotta mess with canon to make an interesting story. Case in point: this entire fic.
Besides, there are different levels of mind control. It's not a yes-no switch. Like when people coax secrets out of drunk friends who can't think right and do stupid things, Shining was being controlled, if not entirely. He was drunk, basically. And drunk people do dumb things all the time. Not sure why some people get so mad at Shining, especially when Chrysalis was actively dosing him.
Join me brothers and sisters! It isn't safe to go alone! Together, we shall commence a reread!
I honestly love this Cadance reaction because it's extremely unique. When I try to think of any time Cadance is shown extremely angry in the past, I can't. Sure, I can remember her getting serious like when she went into what was supposed to be her wedding, but instead crashed the fake one. However, I can't remember anything with her having pure rage like this, whether it's canon or a different fimfiction. Honestly, I love it because of how unique it is. She is meant to be the princess of Love which is the opposite of hate, but it still works because people sometimes say that even though they are opposites it is easy to mistake one of them for the other. An example of that sort of scenario is when Twilight tries to call out Chrysalis, still thought of as Cadance, at the rehearsal. She did it because she loves and was trying to protect her brother, but I guess he probably was thinking she was hating him and his wedding/relationship with "Cadance". Not to mention I feel it is done perfectly with how much rage is put into her words and the rage towards the others is fueled due to her love of Twilight, once again the hate and love can connect with each other. It's so original!