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PettyPonyDearest


Hey, readers! I'm a reader and a writer. That's how I see myself, at least. I love to read and I love to write. It's always been a part of me. I've been writing stories since before I can remember.

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It's tagged as 'porn' when the story is rated E. Was this a mistake or did you somehow manage to make porn everyone friendly?

9347880
"Porn" and the word for "Everybody" shouldn't even be in the same sentence. But I digress...

Edit: Story was changed to mature. So ignore my comment above this edited line.

9347880
If it could happen anywhere it it'd be in mlp and that's probably more interesting than what I'll end up with but it's just a mistake, sadly. Though. I'm thinking a few things now on that premise.

I admit, I read this from some kind of morbid curiosity, and now that I have finished it, I am left... confused. What is this? Transcendity? This isn't even a thing. And if the author is trying to make it into a thing, they didn't do a very good job explaining it. This chapter is a confusing jumble of words that appears to be trying to say something, but what it is... your guess is as good as mine.

It's obvious that English isn't the Author's native language. The sentence structure in this chapter is all wrong.

You guys ever try to read something and your eyes are moving and seeing words, but your brain just doesn't process any of it somehow?

This is one of those times.

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I guess that's how I intended some of it, but definitely not in this way haha. My head-canon tends to be too specific sometimes and I blurt out a bunch of things which are either non-sensical or waaayy too specific for someone else to understand.

That and English isn't my first language. But it also totally is.

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