Winter has covered Canterlot with a blanket of white snow. It was the time families saw each other and enjoy each other's company, friends spent time together laughing and drinking hot beverages.
It was also the time Fluttershy choose to take a stroll in a park. Just her and her thoughts.
That's, obviously, until she meets someone she didn't quite expect, and the afternoon takes a turn she did not saw coming.
This is a little winter special for you all, hope you enjoy it!
Proof-read and edited by TheMareWhoSaysNi.
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Well, you already know what I'm thinking and I won't repeat my advice and everything... BUT
I'll just say that I still find it so adorable and your writing of Fluttershy was just perfect. It seems that you understand the characters very well and it's so pleasant to read. It's a nice little tale, simple and sweet and cute, the kind of stories that this site definitely needs. Also, very like that idea of making Double Diamond an albino but that you also already know
It's an adorable little fic. There's certainly a reasonable progression of events through their day, and they're very gentle with one another. Definitely heartwarming. And Fluttershy's social awkwardness is also cute, too
That said, I kind of feel like this feels a bit too detached from the Equestria Girls setting. Like, you could swap out names and turn it into an original fic with only a very minimal amount of modification (the brief part in the middle where they talk about magic at Canterlot High).
Huh. Was honestly not expecting that reaction.
Also, "D'awwwwww" to the whole story.