Radical Gopher
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You're missing character tags. I'd go with Twilight, Mane 6, Starlight Glimmer, and Spike.
Wasn't the male name supposed to be Dusk Shine though?
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I don't know.... is there a male version of Twilight named Dusk Shine somewhere in the canon? Be that as it may, what did you think of the story?
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There is none in canon but it it noted that Dusk Shine is a commonly used name for a male Twilight within the fandom, heck there is even a Group for stories with Dusk Shine in it (Dusk Shine's Love Life)
I think you mean to say Dusk smiled instead of Twilight. Or is Twilight also part of Dusk’s herd?
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Thank you for pointing out the slight freudian slip. It has been duly rectified. Hope you enjoyed the story.
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You know i just came back to this an noticed our comments and that you wanted to know what was peoples thought of the story, so sorry for the wait, but i found the story rather enjoyable and funny.
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Thank you. Comments, Critiques and Cunundrums are carefully considered and craftly corrected when congenial.
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Could you please do a sequel where the Mane 6 tell their families and see their respective reactions?
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I will have to let the idea stew a bit before serving it up. Sequels, by rights, have to be better than the originals.
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Maybe you could make Princess Luna be a part of Dusk's herd too?
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At present Dusk Shine has two unicorns, two pegasi and two earth ponies in his herd. Knowing his obsession with order and balance, he'd either have to introduce a third mare of each sub-species or two from another equine based sub-group such as zebras, kieran or hippogriffs/sea Ponies. Adding other alicorns would not be conducive to good order or discipline as by their nature, alicorns are an alpha species and there would be a struggle as to who would be the herd's head honcho. Oh, and by the way, I already matched Luna with Big Mac in my story The Royal Apples.
Sorry for the delay in response. I was just reviewing this story and didn't see your comment until now. Thanks for your input.
I think mayor mare knew what's going on!.
An offer he can't refuse literally!.