Twilight, a few years into her rule, is sent out by Celestia to handle a dispute of water trade. When she heads out however, she ends up being swept to a strange and unknown world, the home of the leviaponies.
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... You had me at reading!
Well... that was strange ... It's left me with a "what just happened ?" Seriously, I expected some thrill to be found here...
Why... why is it so short, anyway ?
There were also errors: you failed to capitalise Twilight's name, for example; too many instances of "began to <verb>"; other stuff...
I... I don't even know what to make of it .