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SaltWriter the leviapony


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Twilight, a few years into her rule, is sent out by Celestia to handle a dispute of water trade. When she heads out however, she ends up being swept to a strange and unknown world, the home of the leviaponies.

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“I hope you like reading and board games, because we don't have much else to do down here.”

:twilightblush: ... You had me at reading!

Well... that was strange :applejackunsure:... It's left me with a "what just happened :twilightoops:?" Seriously, I expected some thrill to be found here...

Why... why is it so short, anyway :rainbowhuh:?

There were also errors: you failed to capitalise Twilight's name, for example; too many instances of "began to <verb>"; other stuff...

I... I don't even know what to make of it :twilightoops: :ajsleepy:.

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