This story is a sequel to Late Night Screening
Since last year Fluttershy and Rainbow have been watching horror movies for a few months, but now Rainbow wants to take it to the next level and make a podcast of their venture. Now the only problem is figuring out how to start it.
This is a sequel to the story: Late Night Screening. https://www.fimfiction.net/story/387369/late-night-screening
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Nice. i enjoyed it.
Happy Nighmare Night everypony!
I remember that movie. Was pretty scary.
Hey Barracuda, I have read "Late Night Screening" and this sequel. I commenting just like I said I would and I would to critique.
To put it bluntly, It was okay/good, but it wasn't great. I like the idea of the first one. Having Fluttershy go watch a horror film and not be super effected (with exceptions) is a different twist on how Fluttershy deals with her fears. I theorize, especially for these two stories, that something has to be either 1) tangible and/or in the real world or 2) something she has an emotional connection with, in order to scare her. If it is fictional and she doesn't have a connection with what's going on, it won't scare her. Back to the point, it was good enough that I read it for a quick read, and it wasn't bad. However, I feel both stories could be improved on how they were written. I don't know the technical problem, all I know is that it feels ... young... inexperienced? I'm not sure.
I personally don't like this story enough to place it my "Pretty Good" folder. However, I can see potential. I'll check more of your stories to see if they interest me and are any better. It's the least I can do.
Signing out, VShuffler42
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Thanks for the critique, and yeah my stories are more inexperience as I don't have much merit in writing well. It gets the job done, but I always feel I can do better but something keeps me from doing it.