Digital Equestria

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zachary12

zachary12 #1 · Apr 19th, 2019 · 1 · ·

nice work.

PO1 AR-9U5 Argus

PO1 AR-9U5 Argus #2 · Apr 22nd, 2019 · · ·

"Spike I need you to take a letter." Said, Spike
"Yes, ma'am." Said, Spike

First one should be Twilight, right?

Sword Master

Sword Master #3 · Apr 22nd, 2019 · · ·

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Yes, that's right, somehow I missed that when I was editing it for the last time. Thanks for catching that mistake.

PO1 AR-9U5 Argus

PO1 AR-9U5 Argus #4 · Apr 22nd, 2019 · · ·

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Also...

"I'm sorry." Said Fluttershy
"Sorry, that's all you have to say after you nearly killed us!" Exclaimed
Fluttershy hid behind her mane trying to hide the fact she was starting to cry.

You forgot James (though, he deserves to be forgotten... at least in this scene)

Sword Master