Hyper Metal Sonic (or just metal if you want) let himself die after saving the life of the president and falling into the magma river below. Seeing Metal display such a selfless act despite his intended purpose, the gods of his world and another decided to give him a new chance at life. Of course he will be keeping all the abilities from his time as Metal Sonic. Now reborn as Twilights twin brother, Metal will forge a new path in life as Notte the unicorn. (ok so I was reading The Metal Condition by PyraBlue Heart and thought 'man I wonder if a character like metal sonic would actually have a place in a story like mlp givin his anti hero track record.' this story will use Hyper Metal Sonics character from the Sonic The Hedgehog ova movie)
Chapters (5)
I'm... Interested, yet cautious. I've only seen a couple good fics that involve the Sonic franchise, but this does seem to be of at least fair quality.
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I'm trying to make this as good as possible to make people happy. I hope you enjoy the next chapter.
A little bit fast, but this is good so far, I'm going to read the other 3 chapters now.
I feel like this is going a little bit too fast paced, you should start making chapters more descriptive, and slow things down a bit. Other than that, great job so far!
Nice!
Not a fan of the curse idea.
I have always seen Nightmare Moon as Luna's dark side and the embodiment of all her negative traits without her positive traits and goodness to balance things out. An evil of her own creation born from Luna giving in to her envy and other dark desires instead of coming to terms with and mastering that aspect of her self.
Otherwise, this story is interesting enough, albeit kind of slow. But I am willing to wait to see where things go from here.
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I understand and that is what I see Nightmare Moon as too.
The main reason for doing this is to sort of go off the beaten path for Nightmare Moon. I wanted to place her in a closer situation to Metal in order for their future interactions to each other and other characters to work. The similarities here are the fact that they were created to serve and were forced to do evil things by their creators.
I am glad that you're enjoying the story though and I hope I explaned my reasonings well.
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Makes sense. I'm always open to new interpretations of these kinds of things and the new stories that can be told using them. It's certainly a good way of making King Sombra actually credible as a villain compared to his lackluster performance in the Crystal Empire two-parter.
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I was originally going to use Discord but it didn't fit with his character, and Tirek didn't have any specialization. Sombra was simply the best choice.
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It's cancelled dude. Might remake later.
I know this story is cancelled but when come the remake of this story ?
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maybe someday, I'm not really sure.
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Oh ok, just ask
no continue it
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maybe I'll do a redo, but this wasn't something that I was passionate about to begin with.