You never really did care much for bugs. So it'd figure that after being magically displaced into pastel pony world, you get kidnapped by pony-sized bugs.
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Hmm... ebony milf bound, gagged and struggling while her captors talk about their plans for her in front of her...
Also, a few issues.
So is the plan to turn Vespa into a Queen as well? Isn't that what Excalibur does to Changelings? Or is a single dicking not enough and the only reason Ap cocooned was because Anon did it multiple times?
Also, as is traditional...
APOCRITA!
4 some with ap, vespa and chrysalis?
yes? no?
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So long as Vespa is tied up and Apocrita is queen...
Yes.
Still kind of wondering if Anon is going to reach a point where he threatens to use the logical reverse of his command for Chrysalis...
You know, how he said she will have sex with him whenever he wants?
Conversely, that means she can't if he rejects her, and she is forced to obey.
It would leave her in a deceptively tricky position. If his capacity for infinite love was cut off, she leaves herself in a severe disadvantage again. As well as the potential for her to make him hate her, which could logically be presented as effectively poisoned food.
Most forget that Apathy is the opposite of Love. Hate is not the opposite of Love, but the perversion and poisoning of it.
I have nothing witty to say this time.
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So I guess the plan is to turn her into a queen.
If the rope is going through her leg holes, wouldn't it stop her from shapeshifting?
Best new pick up line
I chuckle everytime Pupa speaks XD
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[Insert Oprah Winfrey GIF]
Anon: YOU BECOME A QUEEN AND YOU BECOME A QUEEN AND YOU BECOME A QUEEN! EVERYONE BECOMES A QUEEN!
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ANON'S DICK DON'T CARE! IT DEFIES THE LAWS OF PHYSICS! CHITIN BECOMES THE FIRST MALE QUING... KEEN? SOMETHING!
Pupa is adorable.
He’s got a her with that hypno dick
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EVERYONE. BECOMES. A. QUEEN.
Down vote
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Thank your for letting all of know this pertinent information.
Instead of just leaving a cheap two word comment, why not let us know why you disliked it?
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Nerdy, socially awkward unlicensed doctor changeling is best grill.
No Pony, you seeing this?
Chitin has to get fucked at some point. Give the masses what they want!
I agree with the squeaking as well.
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That's a valid point you have said me to ap's side
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Cross dressing is fine, however.
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Hail!
my god... Ap you better almost be ready to hatch because you REALLY don't have that much time left
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"I'm a doctor... why am I dressed as a nurse?"
Anon: You're a back-alley doctor. You're the equivalent of a nurse, Chitin... you should have gone to school!
"Royally fucked!" Pupa hissed out happily, drawing the attention of all the adults.
Look out Ap, Shakes-ling is on the rise
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Its in the featured box.
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No Pony! We better get this or the proletariat will revolt and overthrow the bourgeoisie.
And by proletariat I mean me and Pidgeon. And by bourgoisie I mean you!
And by revolt I mean be really disappointed since this is the internet and we can't physically interact with each other!
I want to actually hear the high pitched--only days old--female voice of Pupa shouting "Fuck off!"
That would be the funniest shit.
Someone, please make this happen.
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...
You downvote stories merely for being in the featured box?
i.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/787/356/d6f.jpg
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Oh god, please don't make us write our own story, No Pony! We're sorry! We made a mistake! Please, come back! We won't do it again!
I really want to see Anon kidnap each and every elite guard assigned to him, one in a row. Maybe have Chrysalis only catch on once no one shows up to a group meeting, that would be fun.
Ehh... Don't go there. Please?
I've enjoyed the vast majority of this fanfic because it has genuinely compelling characters and an interesting story. The clop never really interested me, and I've been able to skim over the raunchier sections because they were all pretty much consensual, as far as I can remember.
But if this story is going into actual rape territory, then I'm afraid that that'll be where I hop off the ride.
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One of the wonderful things about the Apocrital Empire is that we truly recognize Anon's divinity as the God of Sex and we do not hoard him, such as the false queen does.
We preach free love, but we recognize his partnership with Apocrita!
Still, you know, god of sex and all. He kind of has the privilege and duty to spread his patronage.
That's another name for his dick! His patronage!
Also, yes, I will see you the next time No Pony posts a chapter, probably tomorrow. Maybe there'll be some Chitin love.
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Same.
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I don't think it will be. I don't remember which chapter, but I'm fairly certain Anon has explicitly stated he would never go that far without consent.
Now, he's perfectly cool with wearing them down until they say yes. And he has abused his power, but so far he has not abused his power to rape anyone.
He'll find a way to persuade Vespa.
That ending was probably just a joke...
Probably.
wait - weight
is good
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Yepers!
ah now I remember something "SHUT UP NURSE IM A DOCTOR"
Wise words young pupa. Very wise words from one so young
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So rape is a joke to you?
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Allow me to real quickly alleviate some fears here. Nothing in Anon's words were intended to indicate he would rape Vespa. I do understand how they could be interpreted as such, but as much of an asshole as Anon is, that's not who he is. There's definitely a lot of dark humor in this story and I won't deny it or apologize for that, but that's a line I'm not stepping over and neither is Anon.
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Do I find rape to be a joke?
Of course not. I also don't find death to be a joke either, but it doesn't mean I can't appreciate dark humor. And given Anon's crass attitude, he probably only has a problem with actual rape and not just making people uncomfortable.
By making a rape joke... while they're tied up.
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It's totally fine. Like I said, given what we've seen of Anon so far, it's totally within his character to make Vespa uncomfortable with that very suggestive ending. He's not going to do it, of course, but he's already nearly killed her by smothering her, what's a rape joke to an actual near death experience?
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Didn't think you were going to, as you do have a good boundary between dark humor and rape. Both Lu a and Aprocrita if characterized wrongly could almost be victims of rape, but you are a smart author.
Also, how did you chug out over 110000 words in 3ish weeks? That's insane.
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I mean, I could understand Ap. What with her perhaps feeling obligated to fuck him due to him technically being higher up in the changeling hierarchy. Consent under duress from a position of power. Now, granted, that's not what happened, but like I said. I understand where you're coming from with Ap.
Just slightly confused with Luna. Both times she was totally in control and there's no way Anon could have duressed her consent such as he could have Ap's.
Oh God I love pupa!
Still lovin' this story, no clue how you pump them out so frequently while still being way above average in quality...
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Ha, I see you too have fallen into the trap that is "Hitting space instead of 'N'", I hate when that happens...
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Good to hear. Thanks for clarifying that.
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Yes, we can really see you like downvotes...
But on another note, love the chapter, ready for MOAR!!! God I love Pupa though, and poor poor Vespidae Vespa should be ashamed!
It's time to dicking around...
Thought, if Anon can fuck Ap into the queen...Can he fuck Chitin into the king? You know? For science!
Between this and the previous chapter, I'm really warming up to Chitin, he's a impressively smooth and fast talker even when being put on the spot.
Hmm, wonder how long until you start making spin-offs of this because I’d love to seea story about what Anon’s kids wind up doing
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you know your asking some ass whole to teach a very young baby how to curse right?
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ok so you explained away how she cant just shape shift out of any bonds on her...what about her using the hive mind?
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Hail!
Welcome, brother, to the AnonxChitin group!
We are currently three strong. There is Pidgeon 9267182, me and now you!
God dammit, grubs! Don't give daddy away before auntie exits her cocoon!
I love her but she is definitely going to repeat something incriminating.