You never really did care much for bugs. So it'd figure that after being magically displaced into pastel pony world, you get kidnapped by pony-sized bugs.
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so aps family have biting fetish?
Anon's Vlad the Impaler has evolved into Vlad the Slapper
Anon needs to bite Vespa to complete the loop! Now, where to do it...
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Yeah. And besides all Anon has to say is 'I want this bitch dead' I mean sure Chrysalis might protest initially but when she finds out that bitchbug did that Chrysalis would be giving the death sentance!
Holy SHIT your cruel! Also, Anon's an idiot, nothing new there. Chitin is evolving well. Nicely written.
Vespa does seem to encompass the darker aspects of what we love about Ap. From here, she could easily become the villain we love to hate or the dark syco we love but don't like admitting any relation to. The worst part of this, from Anons POV, is that he's no choice but to learn more about her without saying a damn thing to her. Considering he's discovering how little he's been successfully hiding versus how much he actually deceives, well, Chrysalis anyway, against an experienced elite, he has his work cut out for him.
So Vespa is a MILF? Okay that's kinda hot. But it dosnt change the fact that I don't like her. Maybe they'll have hate sex later.
I think I would be more annoyed at Chrysalis for not telling me about the whole muscle relaxing thing. she is still making plans for/about him and not even telling him about it. She told him no more lies but she's not telling him the truth.
(even though he's feeling bad for lying to her about ap. something to keep his mind off the situation )
APS blood line has a kink for biting. That's what it means
APOCRITA! APOCRITA! APOCRITA! APOCRITA! APOCRITA! FOR QUEEN! FOR HIVE!
Also, given how this story is going, we all know we're going to get mom on daughter action. If not explicitly written out because the author is a lazy bastid, at least implied.
APOCRITA!
Yep, now anon has to bite vespa as it was written in the stars by the old gods.
There's only one true queen and her name is Chrysalis, down with the upstart! Not that I hate Ap... Unless she continues with simply casting aside all her loyalties and betraying her queen.
Also, nice multiple train pile up of a pickle you made for yourself, Anon.
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Hey!
You and I!
We're going to fight. I'm not going to let some hoof-licking, milk-drinking loyalist talk about Queen Apocrita that way.
This is a one on one fight. So come at me!
I think that vespa should be told the secret but be unable to to anything about it
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The same place she bit him! I know "eye for eye, tooth for tooth" isn't exactly the best saying to live by, but in this case it's an exception.
Say "ur mom gay" to ap.
SAY IT.
I see a threeway in the distant horizon
Well shit.
Huh. Unexpected twist. Good Show.
Hmm. I wonder how the relationship changes between Ap and Momma Vespa now that she is becoming a queen...
Need more morsels of World Building on the double!
Looking forward to more. This is fun.
Change of plans, time to smash Ap's mum aggressively
Nothing bad about this chapter but it didn't really surprise me as much as i thought it would. It might just be that i don't really care all that much about vespa as a character yet or that much of it was exposition explaining her in kind of a boring manner. Sure, the events have shifted the story's direction, but it hasn't really gone forward much.
There is a huge difference between the playful scamp and tsundere Ap, biting Anon to get him out of bed, and the psycho bitch paralyzing him.
What makes the difference is you.
You see it all depends on their interactions. With Ap and Anon it was like two peers forced to be around each other, annoying one another and growing closer.
However when you brought in Vespa, you have Ap in danger Vespa is an apparent replacement, and Vespa seems less like she is frustrated being around Anon and more like she despises his existence.
You framed their interactions to make Ap adorable, but Vespa into a total bitch, so that is how we perceive her. Now, we find out she has murdered her own kids before, and her own siblings, and will willingly murder Ap, while comparatively, our favorites little bug dreams of writing novels.
Is it really any surprise your audience hates Vespa?
It seems to me that milf have a soft side she does
Look at you about to hit hundred thousand word Mark
Can we just take a moment to admire that this fic has updated everyday and with significant word count each day?
You da man!
You know, when you think anon is a "motherfucker" it was supposed to be a figure of speech.
Not that I mind.
Next thing we figure out that chitin is ap's uncle or something.
Anon and chitin fighting over ap. PRICELESS.
Anon hitting his dick off the door...EVEN MORE PRICELESS!!!
So now I like Vespa even more now. Good golly
What
Whaaaaaaaaaat.
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
Hot dog? Well that's an interesting idea...
*Ap comes to scene*
"Ship!Ship!Ship!Ship!Ship!Ship!"
*Chrysalis comes to scene*
"Herd!Herd!Herd!Herd!Herd!Herd!"
*Vespa comes to scene*
"Herd! Herd... Herd? Herd? Eh, little bit of incest never hurt anyone! Herd!Herd!Herd!"
I was about to revoke my hate for what is apparently Ap's mom, but after reading the other half of the story, I'm going to still keep the hate for Vespa. Also, Chitin is a complete moron, regardless if he didn't get conked on the head or dropped as a larvae
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Technically all changelings are connected in one way or another... so pretty much a changeling hive is literally an incest hive
A lot worse before it gets better...
Woah mama
Ap's mom?
Oh boy
Like mother like daughter?
The hole situation keep getting worse and worse, hot damn... no fun thing to be Anon right now.