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TyrannosaurusVenom


I'm new at writing stories, but I want to give it my best. I'll take all the positive feedback I can get, and hope everyone likes my stories.

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Comment posted by Rhino932 Toon deleted Nov 15th, 2018
Comment posted by Rhino932 Toon deleted Nov 15th, 2018

TyrannosaurusVenom this is an excellent start to your story. When's the next chapter coming, also how's things on the audio drama going. :rainbowkiss:

Discord and Fluttershy's daughter's name made me do the quickest "double take" in my life :pinkiegasp: !!! OMG your work is just very very exciting to me. :raritystarry:

:twilightoops: This is by far the craziest story I've ever read. And I FUCKING LOVE it! :pinkiehappy:

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What did you love most in these chapters so far?

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Neighsayer. I always enjoy it when ponies who take the 'high' road and/or are a bunch of callous pricks, and up being owned for it. It just gives me an almost primal sense of enjoyment. It just feels good, ya know?

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Yes, especially since he was smacked around and told off by animals who have been around since before he was even born. Imagine if Torch was still dragon lord and heard all of Neighsay's racist comments, the EEA would be burned alive.

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Haha, yes! Oh, you and I might just get along! You have got this story a follow!

Wait, they're still anatomically dinos. And Rainbow is a quadroped. So, how exactly do they- you know what. I don't want to know. I really don't want to know. Just....:twilightoops:

Still good chapter. This is certainly one of the most interesting series on this site, despite my dislike of the previous story. So, you have my continued support. Keep it up!

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I know what you're thinking, but no, there is no mating involved in this moment, only kissing. Rainbow hasn't recovered enough for that to start happening again.

Is Twilight not only gonna save Indoraptor but also confess her love to him in the next chapter?

ah, the old drugged drink trick, nice, tell me,TV, is the next chapter is was the antihero venom comes in?.

YEP, This is going to get ugly.

That scene with Rexy and Scootaloo really made me tear up, I really hope that Scootaloo will stay with Him instead of going with that stupid rumble........ "Let's get ready to RUUUMMMBBBBLLE" :ajsleepy::rainbowhuh:

1. Is it wrong for me to say that I want Indoraptor to have Twilight, Marble, and Echo (my favorite Bat Pony🤗) as his girlfriends? Because I don't want a love triangle or fight between the girls for trying to win Indoraptor's love?


2. Oh bloody hell! Not King Sombra! He going to ruin everything! 😭


And 3. WHY SCOOTALOO, WHY!? 😭

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Just you wait, things are going to get even more interesting in the next chapter. That is also where the little side note I put in the description of the story will come into play. I can promise it will leave you blown away.

So, the three original Velociraptors that took down Jurassic Park have been thrown into another mix, how could Sombra possibly have the slightest idea of what to expect? I hope those Jurassic Park Raptors can be reformed by Blue and her sisters

I wonder if spinosaurus is somewhere in story of your Tyrannosaurusvemon.

Ripper is growing stronger as long as he lives. And I think that healing factor of his might give him the push he needs to beat his illness, along with having the love and support of his family and friends. Like Wolverine, I'm betting and hoping Ripper's healing factor will make him immune to diseases and give him eternal life

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What did you think of the little surprise included in the chapter?

Comment posted by shadowshion deleted Feb 6th, 2019

I hope that INGEN Doesn't come looking for them, if they do, there's going to be trouble.

I'm betting the defeated Spinosaurus is the same one from Isla Sorna "Site B" in Jurassic Park 3. And I'm thinking he's gonna be a valuable and powerful ally for Indominus and Rexy later on in future chapters, that's if he's either freed or he changes his allegiance and turns on Carnoraptor and Spinoraptor, turning the tide in Round 2. Spinosaurus is gonna need all the help he can get to take back his freedom

There's a war coming between Sombra with old enemies from the past, and the Mane Six and the Ponyville Dinosaurs. But our heroes have beaten them before, and they can do it again

Oh my God that was intense..... But worth the wait, one of the best chapters so far.... Looking forward to the next one knee. rainbowkiss:

I hope the dinosaurs kill neighsay

I can hardly wait for Neighsay to be found out and punished.

Yo T-Venom, I know it's been 2 months since Recruitment but when's the next chapter gonna be ready?

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Sorry about that. I've been very busy these last few months. Most of July was spent putting together my first video using masking clips and green screens and it turned out to be more tiresome to put together than I thought. Last week I was busy attending the final Bronycon and didn't have time to work or focus on my story. I just have a lot on my plate at the moment between making videos, real life and my story, also the fact that my proofreader has practically dropped off the face of the earth is kind of deterring my motivation.

But rest assured I will get back to my story, I intend to see Indoraptor's story finished the way I've envisioned it. I have no intention of stopping this story or walking away from it, I just need to find the time and energy to focus on it again.

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Understood, take your time too. I still can't wait to see Neighsay exposed and the battle between Indominus Rex & Indoraptor vs King Sombra

When will the next chapter be ready?

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You'll be happy to know I've resumed work on the chapter. I've got 1300 words in one night, and I'm getting back into the groove of things. If I keep this up, I should have the chapter finished and uploaded by next week.

Again, sorry it's taking so long to do. My personal projects are taking up more time and effort than I thought. One of them is especially important because it's for a very close friend of mine after I found out her grandmother had a heart attack.

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I offer my condolences for your friend

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Ever heard of TheLostNarrator?

Comment posted by shadowshion deleted Sep 17th, 2019

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that's the youtuber's name, if I'm correct.

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Indeed you are, Shion. I found out on her Twitter a few weeks ago that her grandmother fell and had a heart attack. Since she and Magpie are getting married next year, she got really worried that her grandma wouldn't make it to the wedding after this.

So I wanted to put together something special for her just in case that scenario came to pass. In order to put it together, I've had to spend a lot of nights finding the right vectors and tracing or coloring them all in. That's why I haven't had much time to focus on the story, but I've made enough progress on the gift to the point where I can put it on hold and resume working on this story.

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take your time man and thanks for the pic of ya from Bronycon, here's the pic:https://www.deviantart.com/darianvitkauskas/art/Here-s-a-pic-of-TyrannosaurusVenom-at-BronyCon-808526376, i told ya I'll load it on my deviantart account.

This chapter was worth the wait can't wait till see more, feel sad for Rexy😭

I think in the future, King Sombra going use Rexy old age too his advantage and tell him he can make him Young ( prime) again and even more powerful to protect her and at the same time control him and make him think he's protecting her but actually
hurting his friends and family.

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When the next one coming?

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Please be patient with me. I've been working on what might be my last Youtube video if Coppa continues with its rules. It's basically a ponified version of the lion king, crossover style. Once the video is done, I can focus all my attention on this story, I haven't forgotten about it. In fact, I know exactly how the next chapter will play out.

I can't tell you everything, but maybe this small hint will help: Indoraptor will finally get his revenge on the ponies that raped him, in a brutal way that would make his father exceptionally proud of him.

Can't wait to read it😄

Comment posted by shadowshion deleted Jan 4th, 2020

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just pray Dr. Wu is not in the rest of this story, if so the dinosaurs are in big trouble.

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