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You did , wasn't in a dream
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Thanks, me too!
another good update just throwing them out i'll keep reading
That...is a scarily accurate, yet simple, description of Pinkie.
*Growling*
You're dismissed since everything is done.
*Growling*
Think I found the reference.
But Pinkie isn't a unicorn...
Edit: oooh, was this the got reference... lul, I thought it was a reference to this
Wow something tells me that the story has only just begun
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We've only just beguuuuuuun...to liiiiive. White lace and promisesssss.
Sorry about that. *Ahem!* Yes, it has.
Definitely not a fan of the becoming an alicorn thing and Sombra's change in personality started out gradual but then started making big leaps. Still liking it but I felt I should say something.
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It's okay. I'm actually glad to hear constructive criticism. Anything else?
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While I understand the purpose of the whole soulmate thing I think it makes things work out too easily for the characters. It's used as a means of getting others to be more okay with the two being together. Personally it seems as though The villains are wasted. Flesh out your villains or just skip them. This story already has several major conflicts in it all of which seem to conveniently end immediately before or as the next starts. There should be overlap. This all of course only applies if you desired to make the story far longer. Otherwise it make sense to leave it as is. Well in my opinion anyway.
It's funny. Sombra become an alicorn before Twillight does. I guez the roles are inverted and now Sombra is the alicorn in the realationship