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No is always okay.
Priest is now a Skirts alt
This is good shit. Simple but sweet. Thank you for it!
Fuck, that is a good line.
A clopfic inspired by skirts?
I’mma have to check this out at some point.
How'd you get into contact with shortskirtsandexplosions? I thought he didn't respond to comments.
Not big on clops, but Hell, if it's by you Priesty, I'll give 'er a whirl
I'm not seeing any reason to have this use both the human and anthro tags. I don't see anything that indicates they have pony-like features at any point, so they don't come across as anthropomorphic.
You sick, sick man.
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I'll have you know that I read it and
I read that as literally.
Enjoyed it too, though, lmfao
I feel that, if Rainbow asked Flutters to fetch her some lemonade, it would have devolved into unintentional watersports.
The image broke me, I can no longer not laugh at FlutterDash ships now...I am okay with this
Shit, never gonna hear 21 pilots the same... Gotta go back to Crown the Empire
This was sweet, yet I'm a bit sad for no clop.
Maybe we can get a DomDash in a sequel?
I am sorry, I know It's an A.U., not to mention, everyone has a seperate depiction of this pairing and these characters. But these two are just not believeable for me in this fic. It felt forced and as if you chickened out after trying to come up with a smut concept. Please think about the characters as the elements of harmony and as they react in the show. Plus you kinda played us all with that picture, this is no smut, sure there is mature content but that's not what I would consider as enough for a smut rating. Rainbowdash just doesn't feel like her usual self, it is understandable that she would be drained from training, but not so understandable that she would hurt the fluttershy that she loves deeply without thinking of her feelings first. Even in a new relationship, you must think about your girl and her feelings. Rainbow has never depicted that amount of ignorance in either show, her element allows her to understand her friends and be there for them, Loyalty is who Rainbowdash is. As a fellow writer of fanfiction, I just say, "Please , adapt a more beliveable characterization of RainbowDash. FlutterShy is very believeable, and I hated how careless RainbowDash was in your depiction. I understand that it isn't easy to write for characters you can't fully grasp the concept of, if you can't understand Rainbowdash and her actual personality and or element, ask a fellow friend who may have more of a Rainbowdash personality. I'm not trashing your fic, I'm only saying that it had far more potential than the work that was put into it.
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First, welcome to fimfiction. Happy first day.
Second. The whole point of the fic is that saying no to sex doesn't mean you aren't considering the feelings of your partner. So, I objectively disagree that Rainbow isn't considering the feelings of her partner in this.
Third. I'm sorry to hear you didn't like the story. If you'd like something with sex that isn't as story intensive, I'd suggest you check out Megapone, or if you like long sprawling clop epics, MadMaxTheBlack or DirtyLittleSecret
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I see your viewpoint on this, alot of people will miss that point entirely though. Everyone has their own opinions, depictions of these characters. I'm not very much into clop-fics, I do like stories to be more emotion and feeling. As a first read through alot of people may not grasp your concept, it's a little abstract compared to other works. Abstract isn't bad, it is a fine line as a writer to actually be able to present your ideas as you see them, it's just different, most people aren't very clearminded to understand. Some people may know that concept, however, others just may not know it. I suppose i may have been more focused on the fact that FlutterShy was trying to do what she believed RainbowDash wanted, I also don't like to see FlutterShy crying and battling with her already low self esteem. I love my Shy.
"Happy birthday"
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10/10
This was cute and had a great message