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LegionofPony


I write commissions and sometimes write stuff I come up with too. Nuff said.

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Pretty nice. One question though... is there more to come? It is not yet marked as complete, so...

9596128 Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.


Nah it's done, just forgot to mark it completed since the deadline was closing in. Thanks for the heads up.

wtf was that rap tho

9596160
Nothing but random fun. Hope somepony got a chuckle out of it at least.

Uuh... when did it get so hot in my apartment?... :twilightoops:

This is my fetishes. Let us see how it goes.

You have been added to the list of rappers Eminem is too afraid to diss.

There should be a another story where rarity and sweetie belle kid is grown up a little bit call rarity and sweetie belle Mom and mommy

That was cute but that ending was laughably unnecessary.

Comment posted by LegionofPony deleted May 3rd, 2019

9596998 Did you check your thermostat? I mean, sometimes they...oh, cuz of the story being hot :raritywink:. Glad you liked it.

9597144 Hope it was to your fetishes' likings.

9597224 Blasting and cappin' 'em, eatin' bananas cuz they full of potassium....I mean wait, what?

9601110 Don't think this one's gonna get a sequel. Probably will give that ending a face-lift eventually though...

9601557 So was the rap and purple prose alliteration, but that didn't stop me from adding it. :P


I always like the story to end with the foal being born and since I was one day off, I thought this was due that night at midnight the day I finished and published it, so I rushed to finish it and submit it without much proofreading even. I touched the whole thing up more after publishing so I could hit the (day-early) deadline. Plus that scene where Rares figured out she was preggers was in a picture I linked in the description as my inspiration, so kinda wanted to include that scene.


I may (probably will) flesh out the ending out more at a later date, but meh. I have three commissions in progress right now that I've been neglecting that I need to finish first.

"But...but I can't mount you again! It's not ready yet! I'm not even 'erect'!"

Whelp, that's not something you hear everyday from your younger sister...

"Oh buck..."

Ya done goofed Rarity:rainbowlaugh:!!!

"I'm coming in," Rarity said as she slowly twisted the handle. She wasn't sure if Sweetie heard her, but she exercised her right as her guardian to enter after knocking.

is it just me, or is this a Fairly-Odd Parents reference?

9850962 Yes, yes she did. But got laid and helped her sister, so worth!


9860126 I knew I got it from somewhere, but couldn't remember where...:P

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